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Bone and heart
I'd break the bones in my hands
Into the form of brass knuckles
Sharp enough to cut through you
These violent thoughts plague me
As they are the only comparison
To the ever growing violence you
Have shown my heart over the years
Into the form of brass knuckles
Sharp enough to cut through you
These violent thoughts plague me
As they are the only comparison
To the ever growing violence you
Have shown my heart over the years
Published 25th Jul 2023
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25th Jul 2023 1:57pm
25th Jul 2023 2:12pm
26th Jul 2023 12:55pm
I thought of a particular person who vexes my sanity when I read this and you put into words exactly how it feels to want retribution. Well done.
And a huge hug (not being trite) for you today.
And a huge hug (not being trite) for you today.
31st Jul 2023 2:31am
I love this. The beginning is very powerful. It sets the mood so well.
I wish it was a longer write, actually. You had some true strength going and it reads well on you. Great write.
I wish it was a longer write, actually. You had some true strength going and it reads well on you. Great write.
20th Aug 2023 6:16am
20th Aug 2023 8:36pm
