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Snow Grave
How does such delicate flesh contain
our avalanches of soul?
You stand, but inside you are falling, plummeting
through a frozen gaping hole.
And smile through the phantom ache of pain
buried deep below.
Always be kind, because you just don't know,
how dark may be anyone's crumbling road.
The warmth of compassion lightens life's load.
In my snow grave, I know I will be saved.
our avalanches of soul?
You stand, but inside you are falling, plummeting
through a frozen gaping hole.
And smile through the phantom ache of pain
buried deep below.
Always be kind, because you just don't know,
how dark may be anyone's crumbling road.
The warmth of compassion lightens life's load.
In my snow grave, I know I will be saved.
Published 25th Jul 2023
Author's Note
Sometimes it's the kindness of strangers that helps you through the day.
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25th Jul 2023 2:45am
25th Jul 2023 11:52am
I really love that avalanche of soul too. Thank you so very much for reading. ❤️
28th Jul 2023 11:27am
28th Jul 2023 12:24pm
Thank you for always reading my work, I think of you as such an accomplished writer. I always look forward to your opinion. ❤️
3rd Aug 2023 1:45pm
Hell yes, be kind. And be strong, cause kind people get the worst treatment. We look like easy target$ ;)
3rd Aug 2023 1:51pm
Hard to be kind in such a harsh world. Mean people are usually in pain, they especially need the kindness, which is hard to give.
Thank you as always for reading.
Thank you as always for reading.
