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Under
Under, cosmic kinetics.
Wonder, comets majestic.
Clusters, dawning dimensions.
Structured, optics assemble.
Upward, worshipped mimetics.
Unto, homage hermetic.
Subtle, monstrous deception.
Custom, Godless perspective.
Shuffled, fallen projection.
Fluster, bottom systemic.
Blunder, prompting direction.
Sucker, wanton Symmetrics.
Plunder, processed impression.
Junction, robbing potential.
Luster, product predestined.
Something, lofting tremendous.
Coven, wanting connection.
Rushing, pompous siesta.
Summoned, harlot possession.
Substance, trollop prolepsis.
Uttered, phonics inflection.
Supple, solid perception.
Cunning, sonnet poetics.
Stubborn, conscience neglected.
Hustle, mocking eccentric.
Others, gossip commences.
Brothers, common conjecture.
Rougher, conning engenders.
Doubled, gauntlet relentless.
Jungle, drama dilemma.
Cumber, taunted momentum.
Troubled, haunted attention.
Puzzled, problem sequesters.
Coupled, caustic conception.
Uh oh, progress rejected.
Sudden, novice regretted.
Punchers, dogging offenses.
Tussle, toxic obsession.
Busted, modest credentials.
Punished, tarnished contention.
Cover, darkness perplexes.
Dungeon, conscious complexion.
Suffered, Sodom succession.
Stumbled, blocking pretension.
Numbered, gnostic convention.
Nothing, botching attempted.
Tougher, vaunted correction.
Function, conquer vendetta.
Bundle, warrant confession.
Struggled, fostered redemption.
Judgment, causing repentance.
Humbled, promise presented.
Comfort, Yahweh's protection.
Trusted, honest intention.
Proverbs, garments remembered.
Justice, amen forever.
Thunder, prophet's expression.
Rumble, solemn suggestion.
Hunger, starless ingestion.
Cupboard, garnish angelic.
Trumpets, knowledge accepted.
Summer, August assessment.
Rustic, Autumn aesthetics.
Colors, forest resplendent.
Wonder, comets majestic.
Clusters, dawning dimensions.
Structured, optics assemble.
Upward, worshipped mimetics.
Unto, homage hermetic.
Subtle, monstrous deception.
Custom, Godless perspective.
Shuffled, fallen projection.
Fluster, bottom systemic.
Blunder, prompting direction.
Sucker, wanton Symmetrics.
Plunder, processed impression.
Junction, robbing potential.
Luster, product predestined.
Something, lofting tremendous.
Coven, wanting connection.
Rushing, pompous siesta.
Summoned, harlot possession.
Substance, trollop prolepsis.
Uttered, phonics inflection.
Supple, solid perception.
Cunning, sonnet poetics.
Stubborn, conscience neglected.
Hustle, mocking eccentric.
Others, gossip commences.
Brothers, common conjecture.
Rougher, conning engenders.
Doubled, gauntlet relentless.
Jungle, drama dilemma.
Cumber, taunted momentum.
Troubled, haunted attention.
Puzzled, problem sequesters.
Coupled, caustic conception.
Uh oh, progress rejected.
Sudden, novice regretted.
Punchers, dogging offenses.
Tussle, toxic obsession.
Busted, modest credentials.
Punished, tarnished contention.
Cover, darkness perplexes.
Dungeon, conscious complexion.
Suffered, Sodom succession.
Stumbled, blocking pretension.
Numbered, gnostic convention.
Nothing, botching attempted.
Tougher, vaunted correction.
Function, conquer vendetta.
Bundle, warrant confession.
Struggled, fostered redemption.
Judgment, causing repentance.
Humbled, promise presented.
Comfort, Yahweh's protection.
Trusted, honest intention.
Proverbs, garments remembered.
Justice, amen forever.
Thunder, prophet's expression.
Rumble, solemn suggestion.
Hunger, starless ingestion.
Cupboard, garnish angelic.
Trumpets, knowledge accepted.
Summer, August assessment.
Rustic, Autumn aesthetics.
Colors, forest resplendent.
Published 16th Jul 2023
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Written on 07/16/2023.
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16th Jul 2023 10:10pm
I'm in awe of how you master so many words combinations, the alliteration, the rhyme.
That takes strong writing skills.
Sometimes it takes me forever to come up with just one descriptive word, lok
That takes strong writing skills.
Sometimes it takes me forever to come up with just one descriptive word, lok
16th Jul 2023 10:22pm
Well, you just have to keep putting pen to pad. You get more and more acclimated with time and experience. A lot of it depends how much you're willing to put into it, in terms of work. I literally have a routine of preparation that I sometimes use, for some of my rhymes. Like I'll go through, and list words that have the same syllable stresses, as well as amounts of syllables. Some syllable stresses have certain "sound" to them, (depending on enunciation/drawl) which can be a style in its own (delivery). I sit and think of what rhymes, as well as use a rhyming dictionary. Once you have enough words compiled, you can do like 8 stanzas or bars, and/or more, depending on what form you're using. For example, say, I want to use four 7-syllable sentences per stanza, and write 8 stanzas. I can use 32 four syllable, and 32 three syllable words, to write the stanzas in the format of 3-syllable, 4-syllable words per sentence. You've seen it in my style before. Just find more and more to play with, like pieces of a puzzle. Sometimes, it's just good to use and learn new words. The more you become familiar with an association of your own vocabulary, the more you can branch out, experiment, and explore.
16th Jul 2023 10:42pm
Wow. Thank you for explaining that. That is a great idea to write down the words I want to use. One day I will try to deliver a poem as you do, I like challenges. You seem meticulous, I love that. What's the saying " no one's perfect" I love to see a perfected craft of any kind. Thanks for the tips. Seriously they were very helpful.
16th Jul 2023 11:33pm
