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Burning Light
My Light burns with
desire to find the woman
who makes your heart beat
for her and who
challenges me to
become a better
version of myself
Once we find each other
we push each other
to become better
versions of ourselves
we support each other
we help each other
we will love
each other
for the rest of our lives
desire to find the woman
who makes your heart beat
for her and who
challenges me to
become a better
version of myself
Once we find each other
we push each other
to become better
versions of ourselves
we support each other
we help each other
we will love
each other
for the rest of our lives
Published 14th Jul 2023
Author's Note
Always show the ladies Kindness and Respect.
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16th Jul 2023 2:12am
You are so Shakespearean in your beautiful mindset, my handsome poet, a very honest reflection giving credence to the character of your humbleness toward society.
Enjoy your weekend, in all that you may partake.
Enjoy your weekend, in all that you may partake.
16th Jul 2023 5:15am
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24th Feb 2024 10:26am
The second half of the poem would sound good recited as wedding vows for those who would design their ceremony.
26th Feb 2024 3:16pm
