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I shall work on it (maybe)
With apologies to Rew and her comp
Un rondeau to me sounds more
Like un rond d'eau... un plan d'eau
A small pool for kids
Or a bigger plan d'eau
In the middle of which you find
A superb three-tier fountain
Or more like the French Rondeau
''Une dance de Gascogne apparentée
Aux Branles de la Renaissance''.
The quest continues.
Shall I attempt to write one as per
Dear Rew's exigences?
I doubt I have such talent
Un rondeau to me sounds more
Like un rond d'eau... un plan d'eau
A small pool for kids
Or a bigger plan d'eau
In the middle of which you find
A superb three-tier fountain
Or more like the French Rondeau
''Une dance de Gascogne apparentée
Aux Branles de la Renaissance''.
The quest continues.
Shall I attempt to write one as per
Dear Rew's exigences?
I doubt I have such talent
Published 12th Jul 2023
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19th Aug 2023 2:49pm
Rondeau's are quite the challenge (I've only written a few), but I liked your approach to this, explaining what comes to mind and how it does to French Canadians.
Well done
Well done
19th Aug 2023 2:53pm
We are different. We are like Astérix and his band defending fiercely our small piece of land in the midst of the huge English world that sourrounds us. Regards, Robert.
