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Out In The Countryside
I want to find me a kitten I wanna to grab me a pup
I´m gonna raise em together that's how they´ll grow up
Good living out in the countryside
I'm gonna be a nice neighbor I'm gonna be so good
I'm gonna help with what's needed in the neighborhood
Clean living out in the countryside
I´m gonna fix up the yard there I´ll place the hot pot
I´ll soak there commando observing all that I've got
Fresh living out in the countryside
I'm gonna drive out my sorrows I´m gonna clean up my act
I´m gonna think of today and then I´ll never look back
New living out in the countryside
I´m gonna raise em together that's how they´ll grow up
Good living out in the countryside
I'm gonna be a nice neighbor I'm gonna be so good
I'm gonna help with what's needed in the neighborhood
Clean living out in the countryside
I´m gonna fix up the yard there I´ll place the hot pot
I´ll soak there commando observing all that I've got
Fresh living out in the countryside
I'm gonna drive out my sorrows I´m gonna clean up my act
I´m gonna think of today and then I´ll never look back
New living out in the countryside
Published 12th Jul 2023
| Edited 6th Oct 2023
Author's Note
My wife and I have our eyes set on a property in a small town way up north.
This is me dreaming about a potential new start.
A Jacuzzi is called a hot pot in these parts.
The tempo of the poem is borrowed from a George Gerdes song Hey Packy.
This is me dreaming about a potential new start.
A Jacuzzi is called a hot pot in these parts.
The tempo of the poem is borrowed from a George Gerdes song Hey Packy.
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12th Jul 2023 3:12pm
12th Jul 2023 3:14pm
23rd Jul 2023 8:09pm
WOW YES! or should that be... HELL YEAH! Totally in love with your dream that I almost came along for the ride myself, right?! Lol. Joking aside, don't let Billy spoil your party! Three could be a crowd but I'd sure as hell be happy to share some social evenings with you both, hopefully consuming large amounts of alcohol. Probably a bad idea but I sense not. Totally on board with your vision here, Northern & I really do wish you all the best with this project/endeavor! ;-)
23rd Jul 2023 8:23pm
We have a son in his late teens, so if three is a crowd, then four is a nation, all we need add now is a flag, heh. If you come over, I would be happy to show you around and share some social evenings.
Glad you enjoyed my little poem and thank you.
Glad you enjoyed my little poem and thank you.
26th Jul 2023 00:08am
You are most welcome. I will keep your kind offer in mind because, in life, you never know! Many thanks. By the way, saw this & thought of you. Not sure if you've seen it yet but either way, enjoy. ;-)
https://youtu.be/gpuh1WE-RVw
https://youtu.be/gpuh1WE-RVw
26th Jul 2023 10:31am
I am a music fan, so of course I know that song. The lyrics mock the main character of the song, indicating or putting forward the idea that there is no way out, that the humdrum of life will get you wherever you go. This I can agree with, if one is not aware that one cannot escape oneself.
26th Jul 2023 12:38pm
This is very true, haha. Liking your deep, philosophically actuate thoughtful analysis there, my friend. I believe it'll work out for you all in the country, when you finally get there. The seeds have definitely been planted & showing signs of growth! 😊 👍
