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A Thousand Shriving Midnights
In a thousand shriving midnights
counting beads of hypocrisy
giving penance to the living
to a monger of the bones
and bootlegged crony
in a pale shade of alimony
riding the good widow's phallus
winging it with the host
giving penance to the living
in a thousand shriving midnights
counting beads of hypocrisy
giving penance to the living
to a monger of the bones
and bootlegged crony
in a pale shade of alimony
riding the good widow's phallus
winging it with the host
giving penance to the living
in a thousand shriving midnights
Published 11th Jul 2023
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12th Jul 2023 6:39pm
I don't have a lot of commentary, just the usual:
I like the way you fuck up poetic phrasing. I like the way you shove it in a metaphor.
It leaves me disturbed and engaged, and I think that's fucking fabulous.
I like the way you fuck up poetic phrasing. I like the way you shove it in a metaphor.
It leaves me disturbed and engaged, and I think that's fucking fabulous.
12th Jul 2023 7:13pm
To be honest, the usual doesn't interest me, although I write in many directions. I gauge myself on how I can light the wick in my mind's lantern. I think that words should be used and not filed away in the dust of one's documents. Thank you for reading and commenting.
