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Lets Kill MoMmy
Oh mommy..
you show me
so much love..
i couldnt ask for anything more..
its like you were sent
straight
from hell
above..
You say the most
beautiful things
like..
"If only I'd a died
when born..
How daddy couldnt
love a whore"..
Or taught me
how I best perform.."
I live to hear
those sadistic
cheers..
Things ive had to eat
for years..
Wishing
you
could
calm
my
fears
that you indulged me..
No santa claus..
While daddys paws
had me crawlin
up the walls..
i'm folding..
No future for me
beyond the sheets..
"My
back
is
all
im
good
for" ..
So let me introduce myself..
I'm no longer the kid
that you can hit
sell to strangers
or worth a shit..
I'm a bad bitch..
5'2 body rockin
mind of mental
show stoppin..
and true to the game..
A lil insane
damaged in vane
feline..
So for your sake..
dont make
my first crime..
Killin you... BITCH!
you show me
so much love..
i couldnt ask for anything more..
its like you were sent
straight
from hell
above..
You say the most
beautiful things
like..
"If only I'd a died
when born..
How daddy couldnt
love a whore"..
Or taught me
how I best perform.."
I live to hear
those sadistic
cheers..
Things ive had to eat
for years..
Wishing
you
could
calm
my
fears
that you indulged me..
No santa claus..
While daddys paws
had me crawlin
up the walls..
i'm folding..
No future for me
beyond the sheets..
"My
back
is
all
im
good
for" ..
So let me introduce myself..
I'm no longer the kid
that you can hit
sell to strangers
or worth a shit..
I'm a bad bitch..
5'2 body rockin
mind of mental
show stoppin..
and true to the game..
A lil insane
damaged in vane
feline..
So for your sake..
dont make
my first crime..
Killin you... BITCH!
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Wow!!!
18th Apr 2012 7:15am
this is a raw, honest, painful poem with a kick ass ending!!!
I'm a bad bitch..
5'2 body rockin
mind of mental
show stoppin..
and true to the game..
A lil insane
damaged in vane
feline..
So for your sake..
dont make
my first crime..
Killin you... BITCH!
Bravo Lady!!! peace Crim
I'm a bad bitch..
5'2 body rockin
mind of mental
show stoppin..
and true to the game..
A lil insane
damaged in vane
feline..
So for your sake..
dont make
my first crime..
Killin you... BITCH!
Bravo Lady!!! peace Crim
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re: Wow!!!
18th Apr 2012 6:14pm
:)
18th Apr 2012 9:33am
Powerful write. Devilish, I bow to your prowess. But I really hope that was fiction.
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re: :)
18th Apr 2012 6:15pm
I wrote this for one of my adopted daughters that is goin through this as we speak.. i love her. thank you miss always for your comments..
Wow is right
18th Apr 2012 4:22pm
Damn girl, I feel your pain, however I did not have a dad growing up, but my mom had many of piece of shit boyfriends.....I read your poetry and are these mainly about you because the one about daddy and the little girl that caused a shit ton of ruckus you said was for a girl that you were once in placement with, you can send me a private message if you do not want others to read alright hon....where do you live?
Heather
Heather
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re: Wow is right
18th Apr 2012 6:17pm
yes mam i wrote this for a girl that needed some support and to know that after putting it in words it takes the edge off the pain.. i love her.. im in bakersfield .. land of fuck ups. and thank you for your comments. as always..
re: Wow is right
18th Apr 2012 7:43pm
I was thinking about what you said and had to come back to make sure that everyone knows that these are all my words.. every letter every vowel every verse and every period is mine.. im aware of the story and put it in my words.. not one single thing was recited or added from anyone else. whew. i remember what happen last time and i dont want any misunderstanding.. and also there is a bit of it in here that concerns me as well. yes mothers are capable of horrendous things and i would know all to well.. thank you all so much.
re: re: Wow is right
20th Apr 2012 11:42am
I never intended you to think that this was not your own work, I know that these are your words, what I meant was did you write these poems of other people or about yourself, like with my erotic poetry and poems on drugs are about me or the fantasies that I have had, I think that you do an awesome job and have great talent!
Heather
Heather
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re: re: re: Wow is right
20th Apr 2012 4:10pm
oh i know sweety that comment was for others. sorry if it looked like it was for you.. i appreciate you.. i havent got the whole thing down yet im still trying..
wow
18th Apr 2012 6:00pm
Shit kill on the script you sick
Its okay that you spat infront of me
You so sick I know you can't help it
You are forgiven
Its okay that you spat infront of me
You so sick I know you can't help it
You are forgiven
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re: wow
18th Apr 2012 6:17pm
MATRICIDE AND INFANTACIDE
Anonymous
18th Apr 2012 7:31pm
This poem was excellent...you went to a taboo subject...similar to infantacide....which is not a crime in some countries....There are no courses for mothering....for nurturing....and mothers DO AWFUL THINGS.....like telling a person they wanted to abort them....I could go on....but I think people should look at what mothers do either directly or indirectly....they can UNDERMINE you your whole life......
Courageous write....
Courageous write....
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Lets Kill MoMmy
19th Apr 2012 00:07am
This poem, had my soul heated, like, I was the daughter, and something tells me If she saw her mother, no one else would... Great Poem by the way! *_*
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=).
19th Apr 2012 00:24am
Very true. very true. its a time that maybe mommy should find a god or peace just incase.. thank you so much.
Well damn
28th Apr 2012 8:41pm
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I love the show of conflicting lines, like:
'You say the most
beautiful things
like..
"If only I'd a died
when born.."'
Great poem, too many people have to deal with shit they're born into. Keep writing.
'You say the most
beautiful things
like..
"If only I'd a died
when born.."'
Great poem, too many people have to deal with shit they're born into. Keep writing.
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Totally relates
11th May 2012 4:29pm
ahahah though not to the point of murder intent lol
my mom tells me she suffered 9mnths for me, i told her well shit now i gotta suffer 90years if im unlucky
my mom tells me she suffered 9mnths for me, i told her well shit now i gotta suffer 90years if im unlucky
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Re: Lets Kill MoMmy
Anonymous
27th Aug 2012 3:28am
This is so good! Its so raw and honest in a way, the ending was powerful.
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