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A Civilian Salute
The red, the white, the blue
The patriotic few
That gave their life, fight and die
So we can smile, though mothers cry
Wars are fought
Wars are lost
Wars are won
But at what cost
It's painted on their faces
With camo and expression
They fought to free torn places
To save from domestic oppression
The patriotic few
That gave their life, fight and die
So we can smile, though mothers cry
Wars are fought
Wars are lost
Wars are won
But at what cost
It's painted on their faces
With camo and expression
They fought to free torn places
To save from domestic oppression
Published 4th Jul 2023
Author's Note
My second poem giving thanks to the men and women who fight and defend my country.
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4th Jul 2023 10:23pm
as a USAF Vet who actually did lose a great friend
i appreciate the spill.
thank You
i appreciate the spill.
thank You
4th Jul 2023 11:44pm
Thank you for your service, and for your friend did something so great that not even words can express my gratitude.
6th Jul 2023 9:16pm
Sounds like a 4rth of July tribute to the country's soldiers. Well written and rhymed swell. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
27th Aug 2023 5:31am
Dear CC,
Without their bravery and commitment I shudder to think where we’d be?! Kudos for this find homage to all those who serve on our behalf. Lovely write. H🌷
Without their bravery and commitment I shudder to think where we’d be?! Kudos for this find homage to all those who serve on our behalf. Lovely write. H🌷
