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Spring Breeze
Months of staring out a hateful window with false promises of a better tomorrow.
Under a white sky that drops angelic drops of magic until it's heart is content.
Could mother nature be a scorned wife avenging a vow that was voided before its time?
On the date of March 21st I feel an endorphin rush as a husband to be must feel at the alter.
Under a white sky that drops angelic drops of magic until it's heart is content.
Could mother nature be a scorned wife avenging a vow that was voided before its time?
On the date of March 21st I feel an endorphin rush as a husband to be must feel at the alter.
Published 3rd Jul 2023
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3rd Jul 2023 12:06pm
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8th Jul 2023 5:00am
Believe me, an endorphin rush isn't all it's cracked up to be - synthetic, or natural. It's about balance and sacrifice, at least for me. If your partner can sacrifice for you, and you, likewise, that's greater than any emotion or hedonism. If you can depend on someone, as well as always be there for him, no feeling can ever capture that. Anyway, yeah, some interesting wonder in your submission. I suppose there is a sort of "innocent" disposition to nature. To put it in the context of a marriage, there could be some things comparable. Mistreatment of the environment by man could cause some "relationship issues." In any attempt to assume we can completely understand, would be selfish and vain, at least to me. Like a husband pretending to listen to his wife. Ha-ha, anyway, this is an interesting concept. I hope to see more work from you in the future.
15th Jul 2023 8:55am
Wow! Some great lines in here! This is one of those reads that really impact one as a reader and is sure to stay with them for quite some time. You got some skills dude.
18th Jul 2023 1:24pm
