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When They Last Touched
When thay last touched,
their bodies still carried the
sweetness of adolescence.
In the afterglow of their novice lust,
so many human needs remained unmet.
She sought eternal answers to her emptiness.
Answers the young man could never provide.
He sought nothing more than gratification,
unaware of the treasures she carried within.
their bodies still carried the
sweetness of adolescence.
In the afterglow of their novice lust,
so many human needs remained unmet.
She sought eternal answers to her emptiness.
Answers the young man could never provide.
He sought nothing more than gratification,
unaware of the treasures she carried within.
Published 25th Jun 2023
Author's Note
I found this in mother's files. I'd never read it. The "author's note" she had a habit of writing said, "Written for my daughter's first love."
I edited the photo from one mother took of me and a lover.
I edited the photo from one mother took of me and a lover.
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A man should be into a woman not just for the sex but for the wealth of knowledge and experience she carries. A woman with much interesting to say about her life is worth more than any money she may be have behind..
He sought nothing more than gratification,
unaware of the treasures she carried within.
I see a great perceptiveness of you that your mother had.
He sought nothing more than gratification,
unaware of the treasures she carried within.
I see a great perceptiveness of you that your mother had.
4th Jul 2023 7:40pm
Thank you. I carry some of my mother inside and almost hear her voice sometimes. She read my lovers more clearly than I did.
26th Jun 2023 1:39am
