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WHY IT HURT
it was
not just
you
but the place
we lived in,
the home
we built,
our songs
and jokes
and books
and how
i knew just
what to say
and where
to touch
and how
to make
you smile
it was
not just you
but us,
not just you
but me
gone, too
not just
you
but the place
we lived in,
the home
we built,
our songs
and jokes
and books
and how
i knew just
what to say
and where
to touch
and how
to make
you smile
it was
not just you
but us,
not just you
but me
gone, too
Published 13th Jun 2023
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14th Jun 2023 00:50am
Oh.... you've conveyed that hurt so well. That absence of who we were through someone else's eyes. Heartbreaking.
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14th Jun 2023 11:45am
14th Jun 2023 1:39pm
Dear J,
Wow. The losing of “us” as well as “me” in a relationship is so beautifully related in this poem. Kind of makes me lose my breath because it’s so relatable. Sad subject. Excellent writing. H🌷
Wow. The losing of “us” as well as “me” in a relationship is so beautifully related in this poem. Kind of makes me lose my breath because it’s so relatable. Sad subject. Excellent writing. H🌷
15th Jun 2023 00:02am
Thanks so much, Honoria. Your kind words are always encouraging.
Losing someone like that is losing a piece of self. Such difficult times.
I hope all is well, and thank you again.
Losing someone like that is losing a piece of self. Such difficult times.
I hope all is well, and thank you again.
