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Sensual
What I See When I Woke Up
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What I See When I Woke Up
Dude, I saw this chick sleeping
next to me... and she is nude!
Written by
Green_Arrow
Published
11th Jun 2023
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Author's Note
One person is using this nslope poem to let a friend know what that person has seen after waking up.
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#confusion
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sensual
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Re. What I See When I Woke Up
Solomon_Song
11th Jun 2023 7:25am
The picture leads me to wonder if the title is more a case of What She Saw When She Woke Up. Would make an interesting reciprocation.....
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Re: Re. What I See When I Woke Up
Green_Arrow
11th Jun 2023 12:15pm
Well, thanks for reading and enjoying the poem, anyway.
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Re: Re. What I See When I Woke Up
Solomon_Song
- Edited 11th Jun 2023 1:09pm
11th Jun 2023 1:05pm
Perhaps the reciprocation might read rhymingly:
Girl! I woke up, next that stirring dude;
the bed wasn't mine - and I was NUDE!
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Re: Re. What I See When I Woke Up
Green_Arrow
11th Jun 2023 1:13pm
You don't know what an NSlope poem is... do you?
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Re: Re. What I See When I Woke Up
Solomon_Song
11th Jun 2023 5:53pm
I was imagining her letting a girlfriend know about that moment. How do you define Nslope?
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Re: Re. What I See When I Woke Up
Green_Arrow
11th Jun 2023 7:33pm
An NSlope is a poem in which the beginning word of the first of two lines rhymes with the ending word of the last line and each of those two lines have seven syllables.
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