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You are a gallery full of pain
Sometimes
I want to turn
you inside out,
letting each
sting inside
those stains
know they
are worth
loving too.
Published 3rd Jun 2023
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3rd Jun 2023 3:52am
3rd Jun 2023 4:03am
Dear N,
I loved this message of loving a persons flaws as well as their good stuff. I really admire your subtle and elegant manner of writing. Always just right in length, meter and meaning. H🌷
I loved this message of loving a persons flaws as well as their good stuff. I really admire your subtle and elegant manner of writing. Always just right in length, meter and meaning. H🌷
3rd Jun 2023 1:37pm
3rd Jun 2023 10:05pm
You imbue terrific feeling and presence in your work. It is meaningful and resonant to me.
23rd Jun 2023 7:20am
Yess, every ounce of us
our history
our mistakes
our successes
all worthy of love
our history
our mistakes
our successes
all worthy of love
