Adrift

I adore this little romantic spill

Great

BIG

Thanks PS

fuuuuck!

Betty, you are a exquisite chameleon. Hard core or soft. Dam good poetry.

Thank you, lovely. A poetic chameleon… I like it.

I like how on reading the piece, the two fixed points of inhale and exhale become islands, and the thoughts in the middle is what is adrift. Lovely bit of imagery there.

I love that this zones in on one particular moment. It allows us in ever so slightly so that we might be able to assess our own version of events.

Short pieces work for you, as well as your longer ones. It’s good to see you branch out. Thank you for sharing.

-M

Thanks Missy.

I love that you caught the structure. That the moments between were the moments adrift. Your interpretations are always so spot on.

I love you for thinking.

And thank you. Short form has its upsides. The clarify and focus. But… I’m SO much. I talk fast, walk fast, do things with grand emphasis and emote before people can blink, so I love the deliciousness of long form. The oration, the symphony of my thoughts, and the sometimes fast-drop chaos. But short form makes me step out of that comfort zone and focus.

Thank you. I appreciate the fuck out of you.

Synchronicity, that was right on the tip of my tongue.

Thank you my friend. Yes.

Missy says it all.

But, I'm adding my fist bump, with more boom!

I’ll meet that fist bump with a POW, boy-eeeee!

Thanks man.

I like what Missy intuited, the fixed points of breath, the living moment is lush in your writing. You have terrific awareness of rotating proportions of monologue, milieu, haptics. I prefer your longer pieces but you know what my aesthetic is.

I do. Dude, I read your latest twice and I can’t  listen to it yet because the unpack is… a mindfuck. In the best way.

But yeah, I love me some long form.

Trying to… I’m trying to express myself shorter. Clearer. For a very specific audience, and … it’s fucking hard. It’s good. But, as with you, I do enjoy the grandiosity of long form.

Thank you for your comments.

Your talent and ability shines through in any format you are utilizing.

You damn me with false praise.

Don’t stop!

What?!

No, seriously… thank you

Dear B,

Swooning exhale…yessssss…where can I get me one of these?
I loved the gentleness of this. Finger tips, shoulder blades, cheek. Three amazing erogenous zones so overlooked and you nailed it. Really lovely. I love the diversity of your topics. You can write anything and captivate your reader. Tell me more! Tell me more! (Beautiful write!) H🌷

You want more?! You think I can write… anything?! Muwhahahahahaahaaaaa!

Hold onto your tits. I feel something strange.

Is it … bathing a white cat?
Snorkeling in peanut butter whiskey?
Braiding corn husks?!
Sculptures of desiccated bird shit?!

I’m in!

Thank you for the kind feedback Hon. I appreciate you!

Swooooooon.
I’m still breathing this in.
Love this.

Fuck, me too.

Those calm moments... goddamn, I'd fucking blow up the world for just another... inhale.