Heart LASIK

Sounds like the eyes I used when I first met my wife!

You are, indeed, a lucky man. Rose-tinted glasses are nice, but new eyes… (sigh)

finding sight within love
a gift of wonder

That was a brilliant deconstruction.

There’s a delicious streak of humanity in your writing lately. And I’m living for it.

The subtle voice in this really works for the concise nature of the piece. Feels like it captures a moment. I’m glad we were privy to it.

Thanks for sharing

-M

Omg! Humanity?! I eschewed that shit years ago to run naked with the feral Sasquatch.

Hey. Thank you. I mean it.

Such intense intentions....and intimate resolution.

Thanks my friend

Amazing work Betty.

Thanks CF

Smitten.

Excellent title - Love now clearly seen.

Utterly smitten.
Thanks Davinci

Dear B,

There is nothing grander than seeing love for the first time. It’s almost like having the windows cleaned. Everything feels so fresh and clear. I enjoyed the visceral reaction I had to “You cup my cheek, and I can but stare at you”
I remembered this fellow in college I had such a thing for. He touched my hand and I thought my head would implode it was that electric to me. This is such a beautiful write. H🌷

Hon, you are always such a bright light in the world. Thank you for commenting.

We sat on the couch drinking Guinness and after being together for a year I leaned in and told her I loved her and it was real love.
I'll never forget that moment.  Your poem gave me the same feeling ....

Lots of BIG

I'm glad I brought that back for you.

It's a strange feeling, right?

Lots of FUCK.

It is perhaps the strangest feeling.  Out of body.  I knew she loved me too, yet I sat on my hands and was a little nervous before I said it ...

I echo NS here. Succinct and focused scene with wonderful presence.

Thanks, DC.