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The Sweetest Thing
see
delve deep
eyes never lie
these windows
reveal
the truth
what they
behold
is beauty
felt
within
the soul
feel them
strip away
your layers
naked
to love's
desire
no getting
enough
of you
like sugar
i want you
with everything
delve deep
eyes never lie
these windows
reveal
the truth
what they
behold
is beauty
felt
within
the soul
feel them
strip away
your layers
naked
to love's
desire
no getting
enough
of you
like sugar
i want you
with everything
Published 29th May 2023
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29th May 2023 7:16pm
Great poem! My favorite line is the last one. It makes for a perfect ending.
29th May 2023 11:03pm
Cheese works too, I’ve always thought it makes everything better.
Oh yeah, add love too. That works.
Oh yeah, add love too. That works.
29th May 2023 11:11pm
29th May 2023 11:34pm
There's such a cute kindness within the baring of these lovely sentiments.... One , I can't help but smile at.
Really enjoyed this soft little gem, Colin
🌹💙 - B
Really enjoyed this soft little gem, Colin
🌹💙 - B
30th May 2023 1:28am
weii it was written 27th dec 22
you know I keep them months or even yrs before
I let them loose
you know I keep them months or even yrs before
I let them loose
