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You Feel Like Doing It?
When she opened her
eyes and saw me standing next
to the bed, she sat
up, smiled at me and said "Well,
Stud? You feel like doing it?"
eyes and saw me standing next
to the bed, she sat
up, smiled at me and said "Well,
Stud? You feel like doing it?"
Published 26th May 2023
Author's Note
The title of this tanka poem happens to be what one half of a couple asks after waking up from a nap and seeing the other half staring.
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