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The Witch Patch Pg 38
When death is final
Our entire clan assembled at our lake to pay their respect.
The problem with killers is they always leave clue/s behind. Unfortunately at this time we cannot disclose any information pertaining to the deaths of my grandchildren. I thank you all in advance for respecting our wishes. Grandfather Kane, became all choked up and had to stop for a few minutes to compose himself. After a snuff of booze and a few moments of silence he continued.
And so it is with unimaginable grief and sorrow that we must all step aside allowing the Death Maiden to do her job. The Maiden bent down close to the ground while extending both her arms to form a shell with her cloak, covering their bodies and simply said, “Death comes to us all.” Then vanished with Sawyer and Delilah leaving behind their charmed souls.
The public gathering was abrupt. Leaving no time for niceties, or any type of verbiage. Our baby brother & little sister were dead, that’s all that matters all anyone needed to know at this point in time.
Chastity released the doves of savior signaling the passing of Sawyer & Delilah’s physical bodies.
To be continued…
Meanwhile there is suspicion growing and circulating among our family.
Our entire clan assembled at our lake to pay their respect.
The problem with killers is they always leave clue/s behind. Unfortunately at this time we cannot disclose any information pertaining to the deaths of my grandchildren. I thank you all in advance for respecting our wishes. Grandfather Kane, became all choked up and had to stop for a few minutes to compose himself. After a snuff of booze and a few moments of silence he continued.
And so it is with unimaginable grief and sorrow that we must all step aside allowing the Death Maiden to do her job. The Maiden bent down close to the ground while extending both her arms to form a shell with her cloak, covering their bodies and simply said, “Death comes to us all.” Then vanished with Sawyer and Delilah leaving behind their charmed souls.
The public gathering was abrupt. Leaving no time for niceties, or any type of verbiage. Our baby brother & little sister were dead, that’s all that matters all anyone needed to know at this point in time.
Chastity released the doves of savior signaling the passing of Sawyer & Delilah’s physical bodies.
To be continued…
Meanwhile there is suspicion growing and circulating among our family.
Published 25th May 2023
| Edited 20th Jun 2023
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Copyright © May 2023
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26th May 2023 5:51am
I feel the eyes of distrust and wariness looking all around! 👀
Can't wait to see how you wrap this up... Oh the intrigue!!
Awesome installment, Jackie!
👍🏻
🌹 💙 💙
Can't wait to see how you wrap this up... Oh the intrigue!!
Awesome installment, Jackie!
👍🏻
🌹 💙 💙
26th May 2023 1:10pm
Hello Blue 🫐 yup it’s coming to an end soon.
Thanks for all your comments and encouragement through this process. I’m happy to read that you enjoy my story. I Have a lot of editing to do.
Ugh 😩 lol
Loves you Susan
Always
Jackie ♥️♥️♥️♥️
Thanks for all your comments and encouragement through this process. I’m happy to read that you enjoy my story. I Have a lot of editing to do.
Ugh 😩 lol
Loves you Susan
Always
Jackie ♥️♥️♥️♥️
26th May 2023 6:12am
Dear J,
You’ve worked long and hard on these stories and the story arc is awesomely done. H🌷
You’ve worked long and hard on these stories and the story arc is awesomely done. H🌷
26th May 2023 1:12pm
Thanks H. A few unspoken characters are getting ready to get involved. Like Uncle Giles, and cousin Merida. Also Sally and Dickie will be around, and a few others. Loves you♥️
Jackie xoxox
Jackie xoxox
26th May 2023 7:54am
A really cool universe unfolding...
Cool characters and character names,
providing material for a sustained story arc...
On a side note...
Did you get your own billboard.?.
:ppp
:)
Cool characters and character names,
providing material for a sustained story arc...
On a side note...
Did you get your own billboard.?.
:ppp
:)
26th May 2023 1:08pm
Nah that’s a fb thingy. Thanks for the visit C
Glad u like my little story ☺️
Always
Jackie xoxo
Glad u like my little story ☺️
Always
Jackie xoxo
27th May 2023 3:03am
Dear, Jackie
A wonderful imagining of death and grief. I love the death maiden concept. Brava❣ And yes it is anazing that we've know each other for 10 years.
A wonderful imagining of death and grief. I love the death maiden concept. Brava❣ And yes it is anazing that we've know each other for 10 years.
29th May 2023 5:07pm
Hello Bob 👋 thanks 😊 happy I am sparking interest. I think once this mini book is truly finished i believe their will be more details about certain things and leas details about others. A balance if you will. Im thinking before I write anymore pages i will first go through the story and start cutting that fat and adding a little more intrigue.
Happy u liked the death maidens role :)
Hugs
Jackie xo
Happy u liked the death maidens role :)
Hugs
Jackie xo
15th Jun 2023 5:04pm
16th Jun 2023 2:09am
Thank you lildragonfly :) keep in mind I will be constantly editing until it’s finished. After leaving for a few days and coming back, I can see what needs to be fixed and so on :)
Thanks for the visit sweetheart. Have a great evening.
Your friend
Jackie xoxox ♥️♥️♥️
Thanks for the visit sweetheart. Have a great evening.
Your friend
Jackie xoxox ♥️♥️♥️
