Dolor

Excellent... I think this one of your best that I have read so far...

Aww. Thank you so much. That made my morning. That poem is how I'm truly feeling.
Truly had one of the worst days of my life yesterday, so to turn it into a poem that you enjoyed, makes me feel happy.
Thx Lil, ❤️

Love the metaphors and the way you've taken your personal turmoil (hugs for that very bad day you said you've experienced) and used it as fuel for your expressive and palpable ink, here... That's exactly the kind of poetry that I am drawn to. It's when it's a kind of purging that a soul requires to release the steam and the angst, and you feel THAT in each word written...

Hopefully today is a new day with a tiny bit of relief felt your way.

Thank you for bravely sharing yourself with us, dear lady. Hang in there, breathe and remember that we all need to cut ourselves some slack sometimes.

Sending out wishes for healing and patience all around...

Much love,
🌹💙-B

Thank you so much for your comments and kindness. It is a little bit of a better day. I figured why not create a poem representing my pain, so it wasn't in vain.
You are the sweetest person.
I love when you read and comment on my work. It gives me the exact validation I need. 💜

Thank you so very much.
Nice to meet you.

It's easy to think the worst. I have my moments, believe me! With the right compost, hopefully, you will be ok & may even grow into something more beautiful than you already are! ;-)

Aww. Thank you very much.
Darkness has made me blossom into a better person.
Thx for reading.

this is a sad one delia

You know, I am sad. Very sad. But not too sad to feel happiness to.
I'm happy I created something from yesterday's pain.

Amazing

Thank u. You are amazing too! ❤️

Hi Brandy. Thanks for stopping bye and the nice wishes. Even in pain, I forge onward.
Everyone on here has been so extra kind to me, it means the world.
Sleep well 🌙

The opening line of “sometimes pain grows a root” is what drew me in to the write. It’s a strong image, and one I deeply relate to. I love how the metaphor transcends into ourselves, and our forests of being. I really liked the overall message presented in this poem.

I would say don’t overuse those full stops… they can hinder the overall rhythm of your piece. Maybe just something to keep in mind for the future. You of course don’t have to listen to that at all. 😇

Thank you for sharing.

-M

Hi! Thank you so much for reading, I'm happy it resonated.
And I appreciate your feedback.

Have a great night 🌙

Amazing poem. I love your title! Looking forward to reading more of your poems

Hello. I'm so glad you stopped by for a read. I like words in Latin, lol.
I look forward to reading you as well. Have a great weekend and thank you 😊