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Torn - 05/09/23

Torn-  

Torn between me,
Torn between you.
 
Torn between light,  
Torn between blue.
 
You have to choose,
To gain or to lose.
 
It's not easy to find,  
The words to say and to feel kind.
 
You never know,  
Where it could go.
 
When you are going,
From familiar to unknowing.
 
It will all work out for your good,
And destiny will take it's shape as it would.
 
It hurts to let go and move forward,
But aiming to the light is what we're headed for.
 
Torn-
 
We are split in two;
 
But I will always choose me...
 
Therefore,
 
You should always choose you.
Written by wiseowl (Natalie Kvitkauskas)
Published
Author's Note
There are many changes I am experiencing in my life.. Sobreity, car accident, change of living situation, jobs- everything all at once for me. This was a writing came up in my thoughts for the roommate that lives here moving out. My bestfriend felt feeling sorry for standing up for her boundaries and goals... So she decided he had to go. Once I read the poem over again, I realized it metaphorically related to all my changes in life right now. A comerging of my past self and future self by meeting in the present reality with me. It was an AHA moment for sure. Hope you all enjoy! Blessings
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