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Fire and Ice
Skulls filled with memories that turned to dust
We were so close, we were right on the cusp
An empty world filled with uninhabited minds
Short lived thrills just to pass the time
What is left after all of this?
A dreamed up waltz, a fiery bliss?
The truth can be ice cold
An invisible wound with pain untold
(C)2023- Whitefeather
We were so close, we were right on the cusp
An empty world filled with uninhabited minds
Short lived thrills just to pass the time
What is left after all of this?
A dreamed up waltz, a fiery bliss?
The truth can be ice cold
An invisible wound with pain untold
(C)2023- Whitefeather
Published 18th May 2023
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18th May 2023 1:51pm
Short but like a shot of whiskey to a non drinker, and your flow is always on point dude. You know for some reason we associated the title with inner self conflicts. We don't know it's just how our mind works, again tight work dude
18th May 2023 1:53pm
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4th Aug 2023 1:18am
You have a deep gift of perception, in thinking of many things as having balance to them, and putting them into perspective, such as this. A lot of reality is just harsh in general. The duality is choosing right & wrong, but the tree of life was always there to begin with. That's how I see it, anyway. There are many things to be hopeful for. Anyway, this captures darkness and pain pretty well. Thanks for sharing.
