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An Enigmatic Gesture
a suggestion box...
is that what you are?...
i am?...
the summation of
subconscious renderings
...
porous we are
indeed..
a chorus of expressions
that expands and contract
liberal here
conservative there
cultivated..
indoctrinated
isolated
...
speak your truth eh?
your experience
is unique..
one of a kind..
...
but who's the suspect?..
the muse..
to whom you move?
...
i'm hoping...gambling..
i am not rambling
incoherence..
...
just offering
another suggestion
perhaps..
passing on a message
from an Apostle..
..
roll it around..
see what sticks..
what ticks..
what flickers in the dark..
like a spark..
...
alone on your ark
you surf your character's arc
mark your passage in ink
let it sink...vibe..
think freely
...
push to the brink...
at the edge..
let it all go...
fall from the cliff
there's a gift that awaits you
...
beyond 'that which is'...
is that what you are?...
i am?...
the summation of
subconscious renderings
...
porous we are
indeed..
a chorus of expressions
that expands and contract
liberal here
conservative there
cultivated..
indoctrinated
isolated
...
speak your truth eh?
your experience
is unique..
one of a kind..
...
but who's the suspect?..
the muse..
to whom you move?
...
i'm hoping...gambling..
i am not rambling
incoherence..
...
just offering
another suggestion
perhaps..
passing on a message
from an Apostle..
..
roll it around..
see what sticks..
what ticks..
what flickers in the dark..
like a spark..
...
alone on your ark
you surf your character's arc
mark your passage in ink
let it sink...vibe..
think freely
...
push to the brink...
at the edge..
let it all go...
fall from the cliff
there's a gift that awaits you
...
beyond 'that which is'...
Published 17th May 2023
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17th May 2023 4:48am
I love listening to your hidden rhymes and word play... I can just hear it in my head. (Would LOVE to actually hear your voice, hint hint!) It's mesmerizing. Nobody does it better.
❤️k
❤️k
17th May 2023 9:22am
17th May 2023 12:56pm
24th May 2023 5:27am
It's like speaking out truths and quietly caught observations directly to the one who evokes such symbiotic understandings... I love the formatting and poetic style that let's they reader in on that idea (at least for me, it does!) What a fantastic sensation to feel when coming back to read again and again...
Thank you for sharing yourself with us, my dear poet.
It's beyond pleasurable.
🌹💙
-B
Thank you for sharing yourself with us, my dear poet.
It's beyond pleasurable.
🌹💙
-B
Blue
I am humbled and inspired
that you have given this vibe encore observations
...
My appreciation is magnified
by this visit..
Thank you
I am humbled and inspired
that you have given this vibe encore observations
...
My appreciation is magnified
by this visit..
Thank you
