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Penny Candy Thoughts
My throat burns sugar
Hot cinnamon thoughts
Unraveled my dreams
Love in a clear glass jar
Twirling frizzy fire hair
Gaze darting
On tips of saddle shoes
I choose wisely
My sad candy
Hot cinnamon thoughts
Unraveled my dreams
Love in a clear glass jar
Twirling frizzy fire hair
Gaze darting
On tips of saddle shoes
I choose wisely
My sad candy
Published 13th May 2023
| Edited 6th Nov 2023
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13th May 2023 4:55pm
13th May 2023 5:46pm
Dear H,
Totally feel the undercurrent of sadness even though the activity of selecting candy should be joyful. I love the nod to saddle shoes. How that throws me back to my elementary school days. Heartache and heartfelt. H🌷
Totally feel the undercurrent of sadness even though the activity of selecting candy should be joyful. I love the nod to saddle shoes. How that throws me back to my elementary school days. Heartache and heartfelt. H🌷
13th May 2023 11:57pm
