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Still Water of My Soul
Never lost in the twilight as long as I have a soul
the ghost of memories listening to the pulse
of nature's winds measuring man
at peace with the epiphany in the trees
as the herons return to the ponds
of still waters
with no discrimination of the rushing silence
preaching a sermon in the rising canes
calming the soothing spirits
the ghost of memories listening to the pulse
of nature's winds measuring man
at peace with the epiphany in the trees
as the herons return to the ponds
of still waters
with no discrimination of the rushing silence
preaching a sermon in the rising canes
calming the soothing spirits
Published 11th May 2023
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11th May 2023 6:21pm
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11th May 2023 6:31pm
You have the spirit of Baudelaire in one of his best poems;
The flowers of evil, you make one with nature and nature is like a sacred place
where your make your rituals of love!!
i love your dark side of the feelings..
The flowers of evil, you make one with nature and nature is like a sacred place
where your make your rituals of love!!
i love your dark side of the feelings..
11th May 2023 6:34pm
I appreciate that. There is more truth in the twilight than under the lilies. I love to write when the ink is on the quill.
11th May 2023 6:38pm
Indeed! the twilight is my favorite time of the day, the serene atmosphere takes me away into a gypsy wander, and i often wake up on a poem written.......
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11th May 2023 9:13pm
When I read this John Rutter's arrangement of The Lord Is Shepherd went through my mind, as that song ends in .". still waters". A soulful piece that speaks peace (no pun intended)., especially the line "preaching a sermon in the rising canes".
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