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Box Head Lurking
Used to say
Chaos and anarchy
Were my only friends
Then Box Head arrived
Suddenly
Not so alone
Chaos and anarchy
Were my only friends
Then Box Head arrived
Suddenly
Not so alone
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Box Head Lurking
10th May 2023 2:05pm
That is terrifying.
I fucking love it, there is such a callousness to the actual menace in your expression. The red plastered in the middle of the canvas is like a blood spray, and the manic happy blue with the box head is…
This was a goddamn package! Fuck yeah!
This really told the story of the painting and I actually had chills. The brevity was nuanced perfectly and you balanced it well.
The Fuck!
I fucking love it, there is such a callousness to the actual menace in your expression. The red plastered in the middle of the canvas is like a blood spray, and the manic happy blue with the box head is…
This was a goddamn package! Fuck yeah!
This really told the story of the painting and I actually had chills. The brevity was nuanced perfectly and you balanced it well.
The Fuck!
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Re: Re. Box Head Lurking
10th May 2023 3:20pm
High Praise and I love it
The box head represents a lot of us. Lurking and waiting despite all the chaos around us on a daily basis.
This is part of a bigger painting. Words on paint work for me. You too I see
The Fuck
Yes !!
Thx
The box head represents a lot of us. Lurking and waiting despite all the chaos around us on a daily basis.
This is part of a bigger painting. Words on paint work for me. You too I see
The Fuck
Yes !!
Thx
Re. Box Head Lurking
10th May 2023 10:51pm
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11th May 2023 00:05am
Re. Box Head Lurking
10th May 2023 11:16pm
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11th May 2023 00:06am
Re. Box Head Lurking
You are not alone you got all the ladies who want orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing my friend.
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11th May 2023 00:07am
Re. Box Head Lurking
11th May 2023 00:54am
Dear PS,
Box head. He’s the man second in command. We all know the Mayor holds all the cards and gets us through. The painting is seriously intense. The colors are very powerful and I like how box head is peering around one of the colors. Well done. H🌷
Box head. He’s the man second in command. We all know the Mayor holds all the cards and gets us through. The painting is seriously intense. The colors are very powerful and I like how box head is peering around one of the colors. Well done. H🌷
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Re: Re. Box Head Lurking
11th May 2023 1:50am
Dear H,
Box Head is irresistible, get's away with a lot because he's cute. We work the crowd together, original Blues Brothers or the like.
We appreciate the support
Thx H
❤
Box Head is irresistible, get's away with a lot because he's cute. We work the crowd together, original Blues Brothers or the like.
We appreciate the support
Thx H
❤
Re. Box Head Lurking
11th May 2023 1:19am
One might find this painting to be chaotic, but I see beautiful violence.
I can see box head and I can see box head in his distorted human form. It’s magic, it’s dark and it’s every single fucking thing about you, that I adore.
You never play it safe, always moving to your own beat. That’s the ultimate head space to be in.
Well done, Sir.
Xx
I can see box head and I can see box head in his distorted human form. It’s magic, it’s dark and it’s every single fucking thing about you, that I adore.
You never play it safe, always moving to your own beat. That’s the ultimate head space to be in.
Well done, Sir.
Xx
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Re: Re. Box Head Lurking
11th May 2023 1:54am
Beautiful violence
Hmm, that's something I would say.
Have you been visiting my brain jar??
Yeah, Box Head and I take chances, when they don't work out we take some more.
Slice and dice all the way E
I adore you and your take no prisoners attitude too
🤠❤🤠
Hmm, that's something I would say.
Have you been visiting my brain jar??
Yeah, Box Head and I take chances, when they don't work out we take some more.
Slice and dice all the way E
I adore you and your take no prisoners attitude too
🤠❤🤠
Re. Box Head Lurking
11th May 2023 2:24am
Ooh, I love the intensity!! It's got a great contradictory air to it. Blood on the curtains of peaceful suburbia... dark lurking under the relentless cheerfulness kinda vibe. Big love.
❤️k
❤️k
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11th May 2023 3:28am
Blood, guts and gore and a happy Box Head dude...
Box Heads bring it !!
Dig the comment k
🤠❤🤠❤
Box Heads bring it !!
Dig the comment k
🤠❤🤠❤
Re. Box Head Lurking
11th May 2023 11:13am
There is a beautiful intensity in this.
A silent image on my screen erupts with noise.
Regards
James
A silent image on my screen erupts with noise.
Regards
James
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Re: Re. Box Head Lurking
11th May 2023 12:04pm
It is noisy, I'll admit
Part of the allure of where I live with constant construction sounds. Everyday !
It rubs off into my are subconsciously...
Appreciate the nod and hope things are going well in your art side !!
Thx James
Part of the allure of where I live with constant construction sounds. Everyday !
It rubs off into my are subconsciously...
Appreciate the nod and hope things are going well in your art side !!
Thx James
Re: Re. Box Head Lurking
12th May 2023 4:57pm
I have got the exhibition ready to go, just need a willing director to take it on. It may take years.
I have been working with coloured inks on plastic paper. Painting lakes of the mind.
Also I have writern a couple of short stories. Too much writing to publish. I worry that my neurotic thick prose may bring people down. The latest story is on my blog, but there is no sex in it this time.
I hope you are well. I have took a break from booze. The doc said my cholestrol was dangerous. So I had to dry up.
enjoy your painting.
I have been working with coloured inks on plastic paper. Painting lakes of the mind.
Also I have writern a couple of short stories. Too much writing to publish. I worry that my neurotic thick prose may bring people down. The latest story is on my blog, but there is no sex in it this time.
I hope you are well. I have took a break from booze. The doc said my cholestrol was dangerous. So I had to dry up.
enjoy your painting.
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Re: Re. Box Head Lurking
12th May 2023 5:03pm
Always good to check under the hood on your health.
Catch it before it catches you ….
I cut back on booze too, used to be daily but now not as much.
Like you I’ve got a ton of Art waiting to go but need an audience. Probably have to produce a galley showing myself …
Be good !
Thx
Catch it before it catches you ….
I cut back on booze too, used to be daily but now not as much.
Like you I’ve got a ton of Art waiting to go but need an audience. Probably have to produce a galley showing myself …
Be good !
Thx
Re: Re. Box Head Lurking
12th May 2023 5:10pm
Your work needs to be in a gallery.
If there weren't a huge expanse of ocean between us, I would suggest having a joint exhibition. Pooling funds to hire the space fifty fifty. I am a dreamer.
I miss the booze but I found I only enjoyed the buzz for one hour out of twenty four. the pecentages were all wrong. I often wonder about the famous booze writers of the U.S Bukowski and Hemingway. Did they really mangage to create such blistering complete masterpieces on pints of whisky?
If there weren't a huge expanse of ocean between us, I would suggest having a joint exhibition. Pooling funds to hire the space fifty fifty. I am a dreamer.
I miss the booze but I found I only enjoyed the buzz for one hour out of twenty four. the pecentages were all wrong. I often wonder about the famous booze writers of the U.S Bukowski and Hemingway. Did they really mangage to create such blistering complete masterpieces on pints of whisky?
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Re: Re. Box Head Lurking
12th May 2023 5:26pm
The great writers drank all day, everyday.
Lifestyle for them. Sex and general porn filth are fun to write when buzzed.
As far as showing art, it’s a hassle to get seen and sell. I give a lot of art away to friends. Rather it go somewhere than rotting in my closet. They appreciate it too.
Lifestyle for them. Sex and general porn filth are fun to write when buzzed.
As far as showing art, it’s a hassle to get seen and sell. I give a lot of art away to friends. Rather it go somewhere than rotting in my closet. They appreciate it too.
Re. Box Head Lurking
13th May 2023 3:57am
So which is the alter-ego, and which is the poet speaking? Boxhead taking over?!
He's your secret super hero, perhaps.
I think we all create a bit of a "character", after so many writes that we do. We absorb the words back into us, once they are written out. Sometimes even, we get reinvigorated by our own results. A seemingly super power, perhaps?
Revel in your duality. It doubles your strength.
He's your secret super hero, perhaps.
I think we all create a bit of a "character", after so many writes that we do. We absorb the words back into us, once they are written out. Sometimes even, we get reinvigorated by our own results. A seemingly super power, perhaps?
Revel in your duality. It doubles your strength.
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Wow Styx, that is a tough question.
It’s like Betty, she’s all piss and vinegar and in your face as a tough bitch but inside all that Bravado is a sweet and warm soul just looking for the connection that we all want …
Box Head to me is funny and I think I’m a funny guy.
I make people laugh by taking a lot of chances and saying things as they are. Poetspeak and I are one and the same mostly but PS might have a bigger dick and please women just for showing up. It’s like my outside sales job. I was on the road everyday for 18 years and then the pandemic hit and I retreated inside. I retained most of my business working remote but I lost some too. Now with calmer infection rates I’m back on the road again 3 days a week trying to get back what I lost and maybe make some new customers. I never quit , it’s not in me. I’m old enough to retire but sitting around isn’t my style. So a reinvention is happening. I also have a new sales manager that understands me and helps instead of hinders. Basically I’m a BIG pot of steaming gumbo with beer and whiskey chasers and good bread to mop it all up.
As always I appreciate the nod and RL.
Box Heads have a story, not quite sure what it is but rest assured they will keep appearing …
Stay tuned and THANK YOU 😊
It’s like Betty, she’s all piss and vinegar and in your face as a tough bitch but inside all that Bravado is a sweet and warm soul just looking for the connection that we all want …
Box Head to me is funny and I think I’m a funny guy.
I make people laugh by taking a lot of chances and saying things as they are. Poetspeak and I are one and the same mostly but PS might have a bigger dick and please women just for showing up. It’s like my outside sales job. I was on the road everyday for 18 years and then the pandemic hit and I retreated inside. I retained most of my business working remote but I lost some too. Now with calmer infection rates I’m back on the road again 3 days a week trying to get back what I lost and maybe make some new customers. I never quit , it’s not in me. I’m old enough to retire but sitting around isn’t my style. So a reinvention is happening. I also have a new sales manager that understands me and helps instead of hinders. Basically I’m a BIG pot of steaming gumbo with beer and whiskey chasers and good bread to mop it all up.
As always I appreciate the nod and RL.
Box Heads have a story, not quite sure what it is but rest assured they will keep appearing …
Stay tuned and THANK YOU 😊
Re. Box Head Lurking
13th May 2023 1:14pm
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13th May 2023 1:18pm
That dude is everywhere.
Blink and you'll miss him but he keeps coming back
Thx Lil
Blink and you'll miss him but he keeps coming back
Thx Lil
Re. Box Head Lurking
13th May 2023 1:49pm
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13th May 2023 2:02pm
Yeah, Box Head is everywhere even in my mistresses underwear drawer. She doesn't know who to thank or spread for but is grateful....
Thx CF
Thx CF
Re. Box Head Lurking
25th Jun 2023 1:27am
Love the color scheme in this.
Box Head seems to be quite the companion.
BL
Box Head seems to be quite the companion.
BL
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25th Jun 2023 1:32am