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Shangri-La - with adagio
Abandon everything you know.
Crawl through my blackest hole.
Enter the universe of my soul.
My truths and thoughts are hung
like clusters of shiny stars.
My inner galaxies contain molecules
of my fate, formulating visions of my muse.
My heart a mason jar of a million memories
You are my paradise.
My Shangri-La.
Crawl through my blackest hole.
Enter the universe of my soul.
My truths and thoughts are hung
like clusters of shiny stars.
My inner galaxies contain molecules
of my fate, formulating visions of my muse.
My heart a mason jar of a million memories
You are my paradise.
My Shangri-La.
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Thanks so much to adagio for contributing his talent.
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Re. Shangri-La - with adagio
7th May 2023 5:51pm
Re. Shangri-La - with adagio
7th May 2023 6:37pm
Re. Shangri-La - with adagio
7th May 2023 7:44pm
Re: Re. Shangri-La - with adagio
7th May 2023 8:28pm
Thank you so much for reading. We both appreciate the compliment.
Have a great night. 🌙
Have a great night. 🌙
Re. Shangri-La - with adagio
7th May 2023 11:38pm
This is very good. Nice "cosmic" language to it, to show how the narrative captures a yearning for romance. Concise, clean, thematic, and directed well. Thanks for sharing!
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8th May 2023 00:10am
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Re. Shangri-La - with adagio
9th May 2023 00:58am
You two blend voices better than anyone I've seen. I really can't tell where you each end and begin, and I fucking love that.
THIS?! "My heart a mason jar of a million memories "
I just think fireflies, and the way you filled it with memories is absolutely gorgeous. GOR-JUSSS honey!
THIS?! "My heart a mason jar of a million memories "
I just think fireflies, and the way you filled it with memories is absolutely gorgeous. GOR-JUSSS honey!
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Re: Re. Shangri-La - with adagio
9th May 2023 4:14am
I love you Betty! You never fail to make me smile huge. Those are such nice comments.
The sentence you like is exactly half me, half adagio. We do blend well and enjoy doing it.
Have a wonderful night!!!
Much love ❤️
The sentence you like is exactly half me, half adagio. We do blend well and enjoy doing it.
Have a wonderful night!!!
Much love ❤️
Re. Shangri-La - with adagio
9th May 2023 8:36pm
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9th May 2023 8:45pm
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