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Golgotha
no crucifixes ever looked
so holy
as the night you sacrificed
your body for me
in the morning
church bells
rang
Published 6th May 2023
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It could be interpreted more than one way both spiritual and carnal. You have described a poignant night of love here. To make love then hear church bells ring at dawn would be an experience to treasure.
6th May 2023 2:56pm
I think experiences can blend in meaning. Sometimes the carnal can also be spiritual depending on the moment and who one is with.
Thank you for the comment. It is much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the comment. It is much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
6th May 2023 7:14pm
6th May 2023 7:48pm
24th Jun 2023 6:57pm
It's the little things that stand out that imprint themselves in memory.
Well done.
Well done.
24th Jun 2023 7:26pm
You are sooo right, wally. That was a special night, indeed.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
