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4th May 2023 10:23pm
6th May 2023 3:41am
We are deeper and deeper inside the woman, which is making her hot and bothered. Keep on writing.
8th May 2023 9:18am
Dear KP,
Direct and while brief its impact is not diminished. Very broad images you could feel the heat. Well done. H🌷
Direct and while brief its impact is not diminished. Very broad images you could feel the heat. Well done. H🌷
9th May 2023 4:36am
Your senryú are combustible and contemplative, dear KP.
I miss you... hope you are well.
🌹 💙
I miss you... hope you are well.
🌹 💙
15th May 2023 8:29pm
