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Deadly Thoughts
Me: tell them. They need to know you're depressed.
Depression: don't tell them. You're only going to get more depressed when you realize they don't care. Better fight it alone.
Reason: you may win a lot of battles against depression but you won't win them all.
Me: I'm strong enough.
Depression: I am patient. I only need to win one battle.
© Copyright ~poetisa, maría dé jesús
written 5/5/2019
Depression: don't tell them. You're only going to get more depressed when you realize they don't care. Better fight it alone.
Reason: you may win a lot of battles against depression but you won't win them all.
Me: I'm strong enough.
Depression: I am patient. I only need to win one battle.
© Copyright ~poetisa, maría dé jesús
written 5/5/2019
Published 2nd May 2023
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2nd May 2023 10:02pm
Really great piece because depression is like a living enemy, that is simply awaiting the opportunity to attack. Those internal wars weaken our defenses and eventually allows the attack to happen. Tight
2nd May 2023 10:05pm
2nd May 2023 10:50pm
hello beautiful poetess don't give in to depression I am here standing my ground you can too... I am backing you in my thoughts ❤️
2nd May 2023 11:16pm
Crimson, I appreciate your comment. It’s important for us not to feel alone in this daily battle. That is one of the reasons I posted this poem.
4th May 2023 1:32am
Wow you nailed this piece on the money... depression is real and I've been through it. With the love and support from family and friends it help some fight against it... but with the power of Faith and prayers it gave me extra strength to pull through... great ink Kunoichi! Thx for sharing this one with us
4th May 2023 1:43am
Thank you for your comment! I believe it’s important to voice it so that others can find comfort in knowing that they are not the only ones! They aren’t crazy! They are not alone!
13th May 2023 2:42am
You articulate the situation to the point that I share your struggle... your writing should make you proud.
Regards,
BITS
Regards,
BITS
13th May 2023 6:44pm
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4th Jul 2024 9:06am
I hope it helps someone. Even if it’s just to let them know, they are not alone.
