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Dark's Scenarios
Sensual nylons in the twilight
and curvature of your back
enticing the plums of your lips
and dark's scenarios
exploring the shadows
of lust's catharsis
feeling the burn of Jose Cuervo
on a sunset fornication
a sentiment in stilettos,
of Gucci
and curvature of your back
enticing the plums of your lips
and dark's scenarios
exploring the shadows
of lust's catharsis
feeling the burn of Jose Cuervo
on a sunset fornication
a sentiment in stilettos,
of Gucci
Published 2nd May 2023
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2nd May 2023 9:08pm
Honestly dude we could see reading this in a romance novel or one of those erotic books that we sneaked and read as a teen. The laying out of the perfect dark romance setting heading in either direction. It could remain on this level or it could get darker with vampires and werewolves. The scene has been staged, tight work dude
2nd May 2023 9:11pm
2nd May 2023 10:21pm
These lines have me imagining Sean Young from the first Blade Runner movie.
Stylish!
Stylish!
2nd May 2023 11:15pm
2nd May 2023 11:39pm
That was super sexy! I really love your wording. And Gucci, I love Gucci, not that I can afford it, lol. ❤️
2nd May 2023 11:46pm
6th May 2023 2:28am
A very fine and sensual work you wrote there! Like I said in my message to you, it has a certain classic-feeling noir quality to it. it would be right at home in both a steamy romance novel; or maybe even a hard-boiled detective story involving a femme fatale. I noticed someone make a comparison to a certain character from Blade Runner, and yeah! I can totally see that with this poem, the reference they made about said character. It has a very modern feel, but there is that classical poetry flow running through it at the same time, so it is a nice blend of old and new. All in all, an excellent work!
6th May 2023 2:35pm
