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Sing Song Consciousness
Consciousness
A deep topic
Not knowing
Where to begin
The topic is vast
Consisting of both
Conscious and subconscious
Endless streams
Moving so fast
And the past
Oh man
What a blast
When our minds
Like to rewind
Creating the memories
We hope will last
Through endless time
Consciousness
How fascinating it is so
Not simply a topic
One can just let go
Our consciousness
Such complex things they are
It can help us at times
Yet it can also hurt us
If things go to far
In the depths of it all
Trance state is born
As some may call
Such topics can feel so
Forlorn
So ask me again
What is consciousness?
I would say "where would I begin?"
Because amongst all of this
The topic of consciousness
Can go on and on
In a constant state of hypnosis
State unwavering
As we spit
This conscious sing song
A deep topic
Not knowing
Where to begin
The topic is vast
Consisting of both
Conscious and subconscious
Endless streams
Moving so fast
And the past
Oh man
What a blast
When our minds
Like to rewind
Creating the memories
We hope will last
Through endless time
Consciousness
How fascinating it is so
Not simply a topic
One can just let go
Our consciousness
Such complex things they are
It can help us at times
Yet it can also hurt us
If things go to far
In the depths of it all
Trance state is born
As some may call
Such topics can feel so
Forlorn
So ask me again
What is consciousness?
I would say "where would I begin?"
Because amongst all of this
The topic of consciousness
Can go on and on
In a constant state of hypnosis
State unwavering
As we spit
This conscious sing song
Published 1st May 2023
Author's Note
For The Field of Consciousness competition. A topic I have always been fascinated about. Glad to be able to share some of my thoughts on it through poetry?💜
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2nd May 2023 10:56am
Extremely creative write.
I wish memories did last for endless time.....my mom suffers from dementia
The state of being conscious is fascinating.
I wish memories did last for endless time.....my mom suffers from dementia
The state of being conscious is fascinating.
Thank you so much for you're feedback, and glad you enjoyed! Sorry about your mom, my mom also had dementia before she passed, although it "didn't" take full effect on her before her passing, so I understand. Much love💜
