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The Cello - with PaleSkies
The music from the cello provoked a spell of lustful
longing in my deepest essence.
The melody awakened ancient hungers and wonder that have burned to be given life.
The cellist's perfectly masculine fingers aroused the cello, with delicate yet deeply intentional pressure and purpose.
Each eloquent long and short stroke of the bow was
mind erupting, soul quaking, an enchanted heart invasion.
The sound called forth instinctual emotions,
the truth of me without the lies.
The cello is said to mimick the range of the human voice.
A voice that spoke haunting ecstasy remembered in my bones.
Plunging my soul into a deeper embrace with this long lost symphony.
Like dancing with the universe.
longing in my deepest essence.
The melody awakened ancient hungers and wonder that have burned to be given life.
The cellist's perfectly masculine fingers aroused the cello, with delicate yet deeply intentional pressure and purpose.
Each eloquent long and short stroke of the bow was
mind erupting, soul quaking, an enchanted heart invasion.
The sound called forth instinctual emotions,
the truth of me without the lies.
The cello is said to mimick the range of the human voice.
A voice that spoke haunting ecstasy remembered in my bones.
Plunging my soul into a deeper embrace with this long lost symphony.
Like dancing with the universe.
Author's Note
I would like to thank my friend and collaborator Pale Skies. Thank you for helping me 🖤
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Re. The Cello - with PaleSkies
27th Apr 2023 1:28pm
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27th Apr 2023 1:36pm
Re. The Cello - with PaleSkies
27th Apr 2023 1:31pm
Ooh. I LOVE this collaboration.
I always watch “Two Cellos” on YouTube. They play a mean cello.
This poem conveyed the voice of the instrument perfectly.
I always watch “Two Cellos” on YouTube. They play a mean cello.
This poem conveyed the voice of the instrument perfectly.
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27th Apr 2023 1:38pm
Re. The Cello - with PaleSkies
27th Apr 2023 1:35pm
I like this. Thank you for asking me to share. I have all but given up on collaboration.
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Re: Re. The Cello - with PaleSkies
27th Apr 2023 1:42pm
Don’t ever do that, give up. You’re an excellent poet with a unique style. You’re an excellent collaborator and a righteous poet/writer on you own. The right people come along in their own time. Don’t give up.
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I'm honored you still collaborated with me. Thank you.
And I agree don't give up on collaborating, you are a great writer with a unique perspective
And I agree don't give up on collaborating, you are a great writer with a unique perspective
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27th Apr 2023 1:47pm
Re. The Cello - with PaleSkies
27th Apr 2023 5:22pm
who can argue with a chance, to dance, with the (a) universe?!!
wonderful collab -- You 2
wonderful collab -- You 2
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27th Apr 2023 6:21pm
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28th Apr 2023 12:16pm
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30th Apr 2023 1:26am
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Re. The Cello - with PaleSkies
30th Apr 2023 2:13am
hello beautiful Debbie I tried to learn the cello once but it was heavy and my father had no patience for the squawking noise it made... I did learn the violin or at least one song really well by wrote... I never learned to read notes... I enjoyed this ❤️
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Re: Re. The Cello - with PaleSkies
30th Apr 2023 3:52am
Thank you Bren. I also played violin in fifth grade. I wish I would have stuck with it.
I'm glad you liked it. I enjoy writing with PaleSkies. ❤️
I'm glad you liked it. I enjoy writing with PaleSkies. ❤️
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30th Apr 2023 2:35pm
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