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Magdalen street dream
I dreamt last night
of Magdalen street
the building i entered
nicely decorated in red velvet wallpaper
no one inside
empty as a ghost ship
a carpeted passageway
with lots of doors
i entered one
and inside was a freshly laundered bed
with sheets thrown back
thru a netted veil in the wall
a beautiful girl
dressed in white nightdress
passed me
lay down on the bed
and writhed in ecstatic exstasy
of Magdalen street
the building i entered
nicely decorated in red velvet wallpaper
no one inside
empty as a ghost ship
a carpeted passageway
with lots of doors
i entered one
and inside was a freshly laundered bed
with sheets thrown back
thru a netted veil in the wall
a beautiful girl
dressed in white nightdress
passed me
lay down on the bed
and writhed in ecstatic exstasy
Published 13th Apr 2012
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Anonymous
13th Apr 2012 12:14pm
Really paints a scene well in my minds eye-I really like this-has its own sense of heaviness-even more than usual-great job. Namaste!
28th Mar 2016 3:13pm
Weighted with textured drama & delightful fantasy. A vibrant beginning which dwindles. When the sincerity is lost, so goes a poets verse... Keep Grindin CAOS737
