Her Composition

Your poem within a poem is quite intriguing, Colin.

Loved the way you crafted this one, it feels so candid and beautiful in it's confession.

Excellently done.
🌹💙

didnt see as a confession
but suppose it is

as you know
my writing isnt done with thought

more what comes out of my head in the moment

and one minute im wriying romantic then dark or erorica anger spills

can never dictate what comes

hence im a hard collaborater

That's just lovely....
❤k

tey my best

senyru my favourite way of expressing myself

i can kind of think in 17 syllables

The double play is soooo good! She dissolves me?!?!

Yes!

It it in a good way, like turning to goo? Or like falling in battery acid?! The speculation possible from the sub-poem is as riveting as the poem itself.

Great stuff

dont always find that poem within

Absolutely awesome short but extremely powerful
Great write
Love and light
Ron

cheers praise indeed from a steller poet as yourself

Wow :)
I agree with Lady Blue and Betty. Love the poem within the poem and you indeed are the king of senryu.
Well done Colin 😊

maybe noy king
more prince

Was gonna write king of kink ;) Gotta use it, sounds so much better than prince!!

lol thank you

she so does

yes she certainly does