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23rd Apr 2023 1:18am
Your poem within a poem is quite intriguing, Colin.
Loved the way you crafted this one, it feels so candid and beautiful in it's confession.
Excellently done.
🌹💙
Loved the way you crafted this one, it feels so candid and beautiful in it's confession.
Excellently done.
🌹💙
23rd Apr 2023 6:07am
didnt see as a confession
but suppose it is
as you know
my writing isnt done with thought
more what comes out of my head in the moment
and one minute im wriying romantic then dark or erorica anger spills
can never dictate what comes
hence im a hard collaborater
but suppose it is
as you know
my writing isnt done with thought
more what comes out of my head in the moment
and one minute im wriying romantic then dark or erorica anger spills
can never dictate what comes
hence im a hard collaborater
23rd Apr 2023 4:10am
23rd Apr 2023 6:09am
tey my best
senyru my favourite way of expressing myself
i can kind of think in 17 syllables
senyru my favourite way of expressing myself
i can kind of think in 17 syllables
23rd Apr 2023 4:14am
The double play is soooo good! She dissolves me?!?!
Yes!
It it in a good way, like turning to goo? Or like falling in battery acid?! The speculation possible from the sub-poem is as riveting as the poem itself.
Great stuff
Yes!
It it in a good way, like turning to goo? Or like falling in battery acid?! The speculation possible from the sub-poem is as riveting as the poem itself.
Great stuff
23rd Apr 2023 6:01am
23rd Apr 2023 8:50am
Absolutely awesome short but extremely powerful
Great write
Love and light
Ron
Great write
Love and light
Ron
23rd Apr 2023 8:57am
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