On the Edge of Goodbye

I love the italicized lines, like deep plunges between the stanzas. Beautiful resonance of emotion Luna.

Thank you so much, Daniel 💖

Hi Luna,

You captured that moment with great skill.... and everyone has experienced that scenario.

Enjoyable as always,
Regards,
BITS

Thank you, B!  

Something about seeing you use the word "fuck" makes me all giddy.  Lol.
Did you smoke in the girl's bathroom back then?  

As for the write, Dammit thank you for blaming a romance book!   How's it romantic if it's breaking your loveliness?  Lol.  
It's an awesome poem, regardless of the motivation.  You plucked the uneven feathers off that dove pretty well!  

It’s always such a joy to see you here, Styxian.  I’m definitely still down to smoke in the girls’ room lol!

Thank you so much for reading my words.

I’m so glad you picked up on that, thank you so much!

Agreed, thank you!

I have been banned, i don't know why, like the first time, like so many poets,
You can send me, here Luna, if you want..
richardstample@gmail.com
best regards !

When my wife passed, I felt on the edge of goodbye. It's like losing one's breath. Good poem.

Thank you so much for reading, A.

Very relatable

Thank you ☺️!

Why are all your accounts banned?

My curse continues--- made me think of Julian Lennon's "Too Late for Goodbyes"

Ooh that brings back memories!

I needed this right now. Thank you so much. I read the following over and over while thinking of mother.
"I want to tell you my truth

but soon there will be
nothing left to say,
nothing left to lose;"

Thank you so much for reading 💖

I like the wishing for music to play as we live our lives. Must be a really good book to stir up emotions.
Nicely done.

Thank you so much ☺️

I know the feeling very well
Of this tale you had to tell

Thank you so much for reading!