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Here's My Comment As Requested
self
opinionated
cunt
trying
to tell me
how to interact
dont start
shitting
in my back garden
expecting me
to like
the smell
this ASS WIPE
has a
bite
i will comment
my way
not yours
the fact i'm in a group
that riles the fuck
out of you
gives this
nasty autistic
some satisfaction
this is where my
CAGE IS RATTLED
which is no good
cause now
i make a COMMENT
this fucker wont like
oh by the way
being scottish
i like value for money
those RL's on offer
look like
chinese fakes
not worth
a paypal
dime
opinionated
cunt
trying
to tell me
how to interact
dont start
shitting
in my back garden
expecting me
to like
the smell
this ASS WIPE
has a
bite
i will comment
my way
not yours
the fact i'm in a group
that riles the fuck
out of you
gives this
nasty autistic
some satisfaction
this is where my
CAGE IS RATTLED
which is no good
cause now
i make a COMMENT
this fucker wont like
oh by the way
being scottish
i like value for money
those RL's on offer
look like
chinese fakes
not worth
a paypal
dime
Published 21st Apr 2023
Author's Note
when your opinion affects me
dont expect me to take it up the ass
no backhole surfer
its funny managers at my work have learned not rattle my cage
but every new one tries
dont expect me to take it up the ass
no backhole surfer
its funny managers at my work have learned not rattle my cage
but every new one tries
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21st Apr 2023 5:55am
Opinions are like assholes.... yeah, you know the saying— Everyone's got one!
I appreciate you standing up for how you decide to use your own PAID membership here on DUP, that's as it should be.
🌹💙
B
I appreciate you standing up for how you decide to use your own PAID membership here on DUP, that's as it should be.
🌹💙
B
21st Apr 2023 7:42am
21st Apr 2023 11:35am
Speak it! I agree with Lady Blue.
Who has the right to tell you how to speak?! Nobody. F ‘em.
Who has the right to tell you how to speak?! Nobody. F ‘em.
21st Apr 2023 2:02pm
Yep! I appreciate attention however I get it. 😊 I love that we're all free to interact as we see fit here. And also free to spout off about our pet peeves if we feel the need. Hooray for the diversity & freedom of this place! It feels good to express the rattled cage from time to time... you're spittin' fire.
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21st Apr 2023 2:18pm
may when im angry i go too far
but i dont apologise
i know my interaction is less than most on this soght in comment sense im an introvert
in terms of my poetry an extrovert
but i dont apologise
i know my interaction is less than most on this soght in comment sense im an introvert
in terms of my poetry an extrovert
21st Apr 2023 2:44pm
The only "too far" here is attacking people directly, as far as I can tell. And as I say in my bio, this is where I get to say the stuff I can't say out loud. I think that goes for many of us - poetry is all about expressing emotions, and some of them ain't pretty!
I think your interaction here is pretty similar to most. I personally read a whole lot more than I have time to comment on. We do have outside lives, after all...
Carry on, you're appreciated. 😊
❤k
I think your interaction here is pretty similar to most. I personally read a whole lot more than I have time to comment on. We do have outside lives, after all...
Carry on, you're appreciated. 😊
❤k
21st Apr 2023 4:43pm
21st Apr 2023 2:04pm
Omg I just read that piece, and this was such a delicious mixer. Drama!
Fuck yeah! Everyone has an opinion, and they all stink. Do you, AP. RL your ass off. Fuck everyone else.
Two typos: were = where and interract = interact
Fuck yeah! Everyone has an opinion, and they all stink. Do you, AP. RL your ass off. Fuck everyone else.
Two typos: were = where and interract = interact
21st Apr 2023 2:12pm
being sight impaired dont always see my typos so much appreciat and of course your comment
21st Apr 2023 2:48pm
You have the right to be angry, Brother,
and this site has never been about conformity or only sweet smelling roses so eff those who think they can make people conform!
i want to offer assistance but can see You have everything under control
and this site has never been about conformity or only sweet smelling roses so eff those who think they can make people conform!
i want to offer assistance but can see You have everything under control
21st Apr 2023 3:15pm
maybe not under control
my priblem is im no ordunary autistic because i wasnt diagnosed till my 40's
so was able serve in the Army
so i learned quickly to stand my ground
pribablu the reason got in so much trouble
so when people push my buttons
expect come back.
my priblem is im no ordunary autistic because i wasnt diagnosed till my 40's
so was able serve in the Army
so i learned quickly to stand my ground
pribablu the reason got in so much trouble
so when people push my buttons
expect come back.
21st Apr 2023 3:32pm
You and me have been on similar paths -- at least for a time
i didn't know anything about my schizophrenia until diagnosed in the US Air Force. Got sent to the crazy place at Travis Air Force Base for 6 weeks. Determined i had a functional case ---- whatever that means (no one ever explained it to me).
i often believe i got into trouble because of my mental illness
but every now and then
think maybe there are other reasons.
Having taken care of ( AND LOVED ) an autistic child (my step son) i know all too well the challenges He might have.
Thus, i know a wee bit of what You may be experiencing.
i will ever Your support
if and when You need it.
i didn't know anything about my schizophrenia until diagnosed in the US Air Force. Got sent to the crazy place at Travis Air Force Base for 6 weeks. Determined i had a functional case ---- whatever that means (no one ever explained it to me).
i often believe i got into trouble because of my mental illness
but every now and then
think maybe there are other reasons.
Having taken care of ( AND LOVED ) an autistic child (my step son) i know all too well the challenges He might have.
Thus, i know a wee bit of what You may be experiencing.
i will ever Your support
if and when You need it.
23rd Apr 2023 9:39am
Wow,
Your brilliant avatar picture of the Cardboard Costume is what caught my attention, it's a super image, and then I read this cracker. Sort of in control of being out of control vibe, brilliantly chosen caustic barbs. It's laced with electricity. Fair play!!! Enjoyed it.
Regards,
BITS
Your brilliant avatar picture of the Cardboard Costume is what caught my attention, it's a super image, and then I read this cracker. Sort of in control of being out of control vibe, brilliantly chosen caustic barbs. It's laced with electricity. Fair play!!! Enjoyed it.
Regards,
BITS
23rd Apr 2023 9:55am
