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Locorum I
allow me, my love
to explore the expanse
of your topography,
let me map, in tactile bliss
the limits to be met
at your borders;
a sigh upon your breath
is all it takes for desire
to bloom, sweetly
and fiercely, wanton
lilies pure until plucked;
they grow wild here,
between us,
reaching upward
from the searching
of our roots;
pushed higher still
with every labored
exhalation, until
in the untamed fields
we glimpse nirvana
Published 14th Apr 2023
Author's Note
Written for the Classy Erotik comp.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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The author encourages honest critique.
14th Apr 2023 4:48am
Dear L,
This is definitely classy and definitely erotic. A subtle sizzler that explodes in a very genteel manner. Wonderful write. I wish you all the best in this comp. H🌷
This is definitely classy and definitely erotic. A subtle sizzler that explodes in a very genteel manner. Wonderful write. I wish you all the best in this comp. H🌷
15th Apr 2023 3:18am
14th Apr 2023 5:47am
15th Apr 2023 3:19am
14th Apr 2023 10:59pm
As I read it, I thought 'hmm, this sounds different, classy" even before I read the author's note. You hit the right stride.
15th Apr 2023 3:19am
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15th Apr 2023 6:22pm
Writing clever and subtly sensual poems on top of the NaPo, respect all around sugah.
15th Apr 2023 8:41pm
22nd May 2023 6:28pm
I always enjoy the write that bring a decorum to overall theme, leaving our imaginations wondering and wanting more.
Excellent entry Luna.
Excellent entry Luna.
22nd May 2023 10:24pm
1st Feb 2024 00:08am
You handled the erotic genre very elegantly here. Gentle, romantic with the words and ideas left up to the reader. Nicely done.
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