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wabi sabi
I am . . .
The plain looking me
Nothing special as you can see
An ordinary cut that can’t stand out
Like a floret from the bunch of beautiful lilies
I am . . .
A monochrome soul
With tattered wings and broken dreams
A prism of light that dwindles
And silently screams from each and every fall
I am . . .
The epitome of mediocrity
A kindred soul next to its anonymity
Who would know I exist?
None but the wind that carries me.
Yet . . .
Like each pieces of a shrouded glass
I shine through with each beads of light
I am warm soul with a kind heart
The one who nurtures and fiercely loves you.
And like a broken piece of pottery
My dents and bumps add up to my glory
A piece worth giving a chance to
A despicable soul
Quilted in the fiber of her truth
©mai4-12-23
The plain looking me
Nothing special as you can see
An ordinary cut that can’t stand out
Like a floret from the bunch of beautiful lilies
I am . . .
A monochrome soul
With tattered wings and broken dreams
A prism of light that dwindles
And silently screams from each and every fall
I am . . .
The epitome of mediocrity
A kindred soul next to its anonymity
Who would know I exist?
None but the wind that carries me.
Yet . . .
Like each pieces of a shrouded glass
I shine through with each beads of light
I am warm soul with a kind heart
The one who nurtures and fiercely loves you.
And like a broken piece of pottery
My dents and bumps add up to my glory
A piece worth giving a chance to
A despicable soul
Quilted in the fiber of her truth
©mai4-12-23
Author's Note
In traditional Japanese aesthetics, wabi-sabi is a world view centered on the acceptance of transience and imperfection. The aesthetic is sometimes described as one of appreciating beauty that is "imperfect, impermanent, and incomplete" in nature.
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Re. wabi sabi
13th Apr 2023 00:11am
I find this poem of yours somewhat contradictory. On the one hand, you say you are plain & ordinary, yet on the other, you say you are . . .
Like each piece of a shrouded glass
I shine through with each bead of light
I am a warm soul with a kind heart
The one who nurtures and fiercely loves you.
And like a broken piece of pottery
My dents and bumps add up to my glory
A piece worth giving a chance to.
Soooo, my question is, is that ordinary or is it just the way you are?
Like each piece of a shrouded glass
I shine through with each bead of light
I am a warm soul with a kind heart
The one who nurtures and fiercely loves you.
And like a broken piece of pottery
My dents and bumps add up to my glory
A piece worth giving a chance to.
Soooo, my question is, is that ordinary or is it just the way you are?
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I looked ordinary, nothing special, by appearance, physically. the latter describes the innate things, what's imbedded. . . beyond what i was being perceived. some look at the outer appearance but a person like me sees beyond that ALWAYS.
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13th Apr 2023 00:20am
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13th Apr 2023 00:22am
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13th Apr 2023 00:24am
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13th Apr 2023 00:26am
i didn't say you are. i just like to make things clear (so i asks question) so as to avoid getting worked up.
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13th Apr 2023 00:27am
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13th Apr 2023 00:35am
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13th Apr 2023 00:42am
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13th Apr 2023 00:46am
Of course. I'm not the nasty person you think I might be. I get emotional sometimes & as I say, although I was angry, I never should have vented it so publically, I know that. :-)
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Re: Re. wabi sabi
13th Apr 2023 00:52am
I dont think u are nasty. . At all. With what happened, i was able to realize things. . . Sorry!
Re: Re. wabi sabi
13th Apr 2023 00:55am
No. It's me. Anyway, let's draw a line under that. It's something I need to learn from although it's a little late in my life for that, lol. I'm laughing cos like, when will I ever learn?! ;-)
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13th Apr 2023 1:01am
Learning is a continuing process. . . Dont limit yourself because you as you say are old. .
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13th Apr 2023 1:02am
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13th Apr 2023 1:04am
I know. . . And even when you are. . You are stll handsome! Like a fine wine baby 😊😊😊😊
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13th Apr 2023 1:06am
Oh yeah it's true. I'm like a well matured Chardonnay. The stronger the better... oh dear. ;-)
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