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Three Words
I love the sound of those
three little words you say, but
warm waters pull me from the shore and
I doubt you. My feet no longer touch bottom and
I’m afraid
Even when
our bodies share the
deepest possible touching,
I feel alone.
three little words you say, but
warm waters pull me from the shore and
I doubt you. My feet no longer touch bottom and
I’m afraid
Even when
our bodies share the
deepest possible touching,
I feel alone.
Published 10th Apr 2023
Author's Note
My married lover often says, "I love you," but I have my doubts.
I haven't told him about my mother's absence. There's much I haven't shared with him.
I haven't told him about my mother's absence. There's much I haven't shared with him.
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Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
10th Apr 2023 5:31pm
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22nd Apr 2023 1:11pm
11th Apr 2023 1:10am
Gotta start sharing if you want this love to last. It's not just me, all the agony aunts would say the same. It's all about communication unless you secretly wanna dump the dude. Just sayin'. ;-)
11th Apr 2023 1:11am
11th Apr 2023 5:11am
Be honest with people. I'm here if you need an ear to listen to. Keep on writing.
17th Apr 2023 1:17am
I appreciate the vulnerability of the writing here. I resonate with the feeling of being alone while with someone.
Thank you for your insight. Such a strange sensation, but I'm learning it's common to many of us.
Anonymous
17th Apr 2023 12:05pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Jul 2023 1:45pm
22nd Apr 2023 1:07pm
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