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she is tender flow
embraced by one thousand worlds
virtuous wisdom
a teacher sharer
in concise dialog small
larger than life thoughtfulness
procurer of thoughts
soft or sharp deep with meaning
a reflective pool
syllables gathered
with so much delicateness
in curious ease
she is light and fire
offering honesty kind
friend among poets
she brightens the page
with her creativity
warm honey sunshine
blessed with her presence
when she finds the time to share
her beautiful mind
in shortened verses
her stories are unfolded
tapestries of life
heartfelt novellas
deeply rooted in spirit
laid bare in ink strokes
a gilded flower
being, grace personified
master of haiku
[A Tribute to Chiyo]
embraced by one thousand worlds
virtuous wisdom
a teacher sharer
in concise dialog small
larger than life thoughtfulness
procurer of thoughts
soft or sharp deep with meaning
a reflective pool
syllables gathered
with so much delicateness
in curious ease
she is light and fire
offering honesty kind
friend among poets
she brightens the page
with her creativity
warm honey sunshine
blessed with her presence
when she finds the time to share
her beautiful mind
in shortened verses
her stories are unfolded
tapestries of life
heartfelt novellas
deeply rooted in spirit
laid bare in ink strokes
a gilded flower
being, grace personified
master of haiku
[A Tribute to Chiyo]
Published 9th Apr 2023
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9th Apr 2023 3:57pm
This is a beautiful tribute Jeje, thank you so much for being a person of such positive and soulful presence here.
9th Apr 2023 7:10pm
Thank you so much Daniel for creating the space to honor and share. You are a bright light flow of kindness and a beautiful positive soul. Thank you for BEing here.
🦋
JeJe
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JeJe
9th Apr 2023 7:22pm
Thank you so much Crimsin for your beautiful comments .. very much appreciated as is her taking for your RL .. humbled and honored
🦋
JeJe
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JeJe
9th Apr 2023 9:27pm
Dear J,
This write was a wonderful retreat. Each stanza was a dreamscape. And such a challenge with the limited syllable count. Lovely. H🌷
This write was a wonderful retreat. Each stanza was a dreamscape. And such a challenge with the limited syllable count. Lovely. H🌷
10th Apr 2023 8:27am
Dear H,
Thank you so much for your lovely comments, very much appreciated. This was a good challenge for me. I love haiku and its simplicity.
Humbled and honored by your taking.
🦋
JeJe
Thank you so much for your lovely comments, very much appreciated. This was a good challenge for me. I love haiku and its simplicity.
Humbled and honored by your taking.
🦋
JeJe
