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Rotten Neurons
I'm missing something
And I truly don't know what
Feel like I've ignored a pain and
It turned out to be an infected cut
I would in a singular heartbeat
Take a pair of scissors into my hand
And cut the neurons rotting away
In my head that makes me think
And I truly don't know what
Feel like I've ignored a pain and
It turned out to be an infected cut
I would in a singular heartbeat
Take a pair of scissors into my hand
And cut the neurons rotting away
In my head that makes me think
Published 3rd Apr 2023
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3rd Apr 2023 7:25pm
3rd Apr 2023 7:47pm
Thank you. I was working on this in my mind for awhile today. Finally lined up nicely 😁
3rd Apr 2023 7:48pm
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3rd Apr 2023 10:18pm
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3rd Apr 2023 10:58pm
Do you always respond in poems? And thank you for the response. I like the poetic response
3rd Apr 2023 10:58pm
Do you always respond in poems? And thank you for the response. I like the poetic response
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2023 11:00pm
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3rd Apr 2023 11:05pm
I appreciate your style. It's refreshing as hell. I haven't had this type of feedback in a long while. I eagerly look forward to your feedback.
9th May 2023 7:12am
It's the rushing to the worst part of our extremes that makes this relatable (at least to me) when these thoughts run through and it can be pretty scary.
