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Who Kills the Kids?
Who kills the kids, books and drag-shows?
" Shoot!" The lawmakers say, " folk know,
an' we'll gun for 'em jail those dames,
burn books before kid's damaged or maimed
and ban abortions, get more kids grown."
Lawmakers dread books and Dames grow,
a Beau to Belle, or Belle to Beau...
but haven't the gumption to name
Who kills the kids.
They fight faux fights with these faux foes
with huge flows of taxpayers dough,
to ban kids books and Panto Dames?
and strangely, never, show much shame
tamed by the NRA? but, whoa!
Who kills the kids?
" Shoot!" The lawmakers say, " folk know,
an' we'll gun for 'em jail those dames,
burn books before kid's damaged or maimed
and ban abortions, get more kids grown."
Lawmakers dread books and Dames grow,
a Beau to Belle, or Belle to Beau...
but haven't the gumption to name
Who kills the kids.
They fight faux fights with these faux foes
with huge flows of taxpayers dough,
to ban kids books and Panto Dames?
and strangely, never, show much shame
tamed by the NRA? but, whoa!
Who kills the kids?
Author's Note
B. AP
It is a rondeau.
Beau, here, representing boy
Belle, here, representing girl
It is a rondeau.
Beau, here, representing boy
Belle, here, representing girl
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Re. Who Kills the Kids?
31st Mar 2023 5:47pm
And the GOP stick to their guns............in that latests incident gun laws in that state were even loosened. Even with deaths, the Gov said nothing will change. As the reporters asked him what about the gov's kids? He simply replied that he HOPED nothing wrong would happen to them. Hoped.
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Re: Re. Who Kills the Kids?
31st Mar 2023 6:48pm
It's an awful world they've got.
And the gop's terrified of upsetting their voters, loosing their seats & income. So, kids get dead.
And the gop's terrified of upsetting their voters, loosing their seats & income. So, kids get dead.
Re. Who Kills the Kids?
31st Mar 2023 6:26pm
Hi Few,
I hope Ur well?
This is a fantastic,thought provoking,
Stretching of mind,journey you've taken us on.
I was hooked!
Excellent write.
Take care.
X
Brilliant
I hope Ur well?
This is a fantastic,thought provoking,
Stretching of mind,journey you've taken us on.
I was hooked!
Excellent write.
Take care.
X
Brilliant
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Re: Re. Who Kills the Kids?
31st Mar 2023 6:54pm
Re: Re. Who Kills the Kids?
Spelling mistake of your name Few.---Shit! Meant Rew!
My apologises.
I quite like "Hired6!!" Lol
Take care.
X
My apologises.
I quite like "Hired6!!" Lol
Take care.
X
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Re: Re. Who Kills the Kids?
1st Apr 2023 8:00am
Sorry, sorry mea culpa. I'm dead paranoid and hate it if my name's spelled wrong. Thank you so much for correcting it.
Phew!
X
Phew!
X
Re: Re. Who Kills the Kids?
Ur Welcome Rew!
It was merely a "typo Error." Not intentional,
So I understand if my name is spelled incorrectly.
Shit happens!
Mea maxima culpa.
Take care.
X
It was merely a "typo Error." Not intentional,
So I understand if my name is spelled incorrectly.
Shit happens!
Mea maxima culpa.
Take care.
X
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Re. Who Kills the Kids?
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4th Apr 2023 1:43am
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Re: Re. Who Kills the Kids?
5th Apr 2023 5:52pm
This comment comes up as likely having been generated by a chat bot, such as ChatGPT. There is a forum discussion about this where there is also a link to a website that analyzes content and gives a percentage likelihood that it was chat bot generated. Here is a link to the forum discussion,
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/561259/gotopost/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/561259/gotopost/
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Re: Re. Who Kills the Kids?
6th Apr 2023 11:25am
Cheers Daniel, thanks for the comment. I don't really know what it means but thanks anyway.
I guess if I follow the link you've supplied things will become clearer. I'll follow it later. Thanks.
I guess if I follow the link you've supplied things will become clearer. I'll follow it later. Thanks.
Re: Re. Who Kills the Kids?
6th Apr 2023 12:20pm
Well Mr Black you are quite a powerful writer yourself as your reviews & comments testify.
I thank you for mine.
I thank you for mine.
Re: Re. Who Kills the Kids?
7th Apr 2023 3:23pm
Hi Daniel.
" This comment comes up as likely having been generated by a chat bot, such as ChatGPT. "
I'm finding your comment, reproduced above, a bit confusing. Please enlighten me. Which comment are you referring to?
regards from Rew. x
" This comment comes up as likely having been generated by a chat bot, such as ChatGPT. "
I'm finding your comment, reproduced above, a bit confusing. Please enlighten me. Which comment are you referring to?
regards from Rew. x
Re: Re. Who Kills the Kids?
8th Apr 2023 4:40pm
My thoughts exactly. Ty for the link. I read another “interpretation” the other day which sounded much like the one you referenced and pointed it out. My feeling is that if we do use AI to comment, we should acknowledge it at a minimum.
Ty.
Ty.
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