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Return Me To The Tip
Heat singes
quivering thighs
Muscles wrought
hard soft,
skin slips
over bone
Over, - and over
Lips wet, drip,
perch high on
you're knee
Rising , sweat
induced scent
intoxicating state
rhythm hypnotic,
lost
pounding, beat
Stop- never.…
I am fluid,
bring me back,
again
drink me in,
screams heard
from my soul
erection rests
bodies flow
return me to the
tip
quivering thighs
Muscles wrought
hard soft,
skin slips
over bone
Over, - and over
Lips wet, drip,
perch high on
you're knee
Rising , sweat
induced scent
intoxicating state
rhythm hypnotic,
lost
pounding, beat
Stop- never.…
I am fluid,
bring me back,
again
drink me in,
screams heard
from my soul
erection rests
bodies flow
return me to the
tip
Published 31st Mar 2023
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31st Mar 2023 7:23am
Reads as the thoughts of a sperm, is it? This verse reads like its futile protest against being ejected into the gynaecological world:
Stop- never.…
I am fluid,
bring me back,
again
BTW "Tip" in English parlance means "rubbish dump", so the title might be read by someone who doesn't go on to read the poem itself as "Put me back in the dump where I am happy to be".
Stop- never.…
I am fluid,
bring me back,
again
BTW "Tip" in English parlance means "rubbish dump", so the title might be read by someone who doesn't go on to read the poem itself as "Put me back in the dump where I am happy to be".
31st Mar 2023 1:00pm
Very interesting comment thank you
You have grasped my point roughly as far as the reality of random thoughts during a sexual experience
Thank you so much
You have grasped my point roughly as far as the reality of random thoughts during a sexual experience
Thank you so much
