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Too
Just what shall I do
when someone wants less of me?
Shrink? Or turn away?
Published 31st Mar 2023
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Too much, too often.
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Anonymous
31st Mar 2023 3:46am
Hi Broken,
How Ru?
A powerfully succinct piece.
Take care.
X
How Ru?
A powerfully succinct piece.
Take care.
X
31st Mar 2023 9:20am
I think...
Enfold into the self...
Regroup...
Realign the Chi...
And you will be wanted again, even more deeply...
(Not any "you" in specific...)
Enfold into the self...
Regroup...
Realign the Chi...
And you will be wanted again, even more deeply...
(Not any "you" in specific...)
31st Mar 2023 1:38pm
Dear K,
This poem is touching because it makes me think of all of my insecure times and how I’m thought of. The idea of minimizing or disappearing altogether is such a potent option process. What outcome will I get? 50-50 odds. Poignant write, very very relatable. H🌷
This poem is touching because it makes me think of all of my insecure times and how I’m thought of. The idea of minimizing or disappearing altogether is such a potent option process. What outcome will I get? 50-50 odds. Poignant write, very very relatable. H🌷
31st Mar 2023 3:56pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 17th Jan 2024 00:45am
1st Apr 2023 2:20pm
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6th May 2023 00:57am
It’s a difficult question to ask yourself and the answer is even harder to deal with. Never shrink always grow
Nicely penned
Nicely penned
