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Crème brûlée
I need you
so close that if
gods and angels
looked down
on my nakedness
they’d see nothing but
your strong back
flexing in slow
slow
motion
so close that if
gods and angels
looked down
on my nakedness
they’d see nothing but
your strong back
flexing in slow
slow
motion
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22nd Mar 2023 9:31pm
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22nd Mar 2023 9:41pm
I love your work. You seem like a beautifully complex person. And have showed me nothing but great kindness since I joined. Appreciate you too!
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22nd Mar 2023 11:14pm
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23rd Mar 2023 00:41am
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23rd Mar 2023 00:42am
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23rd Mar 2023 00:44am
Fuck. I had to look it up.
You were… (gag)
You were… (dry heaves)
You were right (delicately vomits)
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22nd Mar 2023 11:38pm
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23rd Mar 2023 00:42am
Re. Crème brûlée
23rd Mar 2023 1:24am
(That error message about "like"s and R/Ls is really pushing the commitment thing, isn't it?
You know what's coming; We'll have to buy "Like Tokens", and as we spend them, we get a R/L to splurge on).
As for your beautiful write;
"And as those gods and angels frown,
trying to push me aside,
I scoff, reminding them
they forfeit such human rights."
You know what's coming; We'll have to buy "Like Tokens", and as we spend them, we get a R/L to splurge on).
As for your beautiful write;
"And as those gods and angels frown,
trying to push me aside,
I scoff, reminding them
they forfeit such human rights."
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Re: Re. Crème brûlée
23rd Mar 2023 1:32am
I’m sorry you’re going through that. They posted an update in the forum. You get more R/L I think for reviews.
Fuck me. I love/hate it when you out comment my poem. You’re kind of amazing, and I’m always flattered when you stop by.
Thanks Styx.
-B
Fuck me. I love/hate it when you out comment my poem. You’re kind of amazing, and I’m always flattered when you stop by.
Thanks Styx.
-B
Re. Crème brûlée
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2023 1:49am
This is dope!!!
Just the rawness of it
speak volumes
Just the rawness of it
speak volumes
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Re: Re. Crème brûlée
23rd Mar 2023 2:03am
No, YOU are dope for stopping by!
Good to see you Naaj. Thanks for the kicksss review!
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23rd Mar 2023 6:39am
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23rd Mar 2023 12:25pm
What, you or me?
I just like skin sliding against mine. Top, bottom, sideway, upside down…
But missionary is super intimate. To twine your body, blend your breath, watch the play on the stage of a lover’s face…. I’m in.
Re: Re. Crème brûlée
23rd Mar 2023 7:29pm
I was referring to you. I have done at least one poem exploring the position, its advantages and drawbacks.
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23rd Mar 2023 8:25pm
Oh, yeah it’s not a preference. I just like to fuck. Also it’s harder to write something sensual when my face is in the pillow and my hips are handles.
Sometimes the poem makes the position.
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Anonymous
24th Mar 2023 2:42am
Typing in slow motion. Gurl. You amaze me every damn time
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Re: Re. Crème brûlée
24th Mar 2023 12:16pm
Guurl. Yeah. Slow motion has its merits, doesn’t it?
Thank you, lovely. I appreciate you.
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24th Mar 2023 12:20pm
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24th Mar 2023 12:38pm
That… is a lovely comment. I’m glad to have gotten the heart racing LJ. I really appreciate your kind feedback.