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Until She Heard A Sudden Beeping Sound
Lucy opened her eyes and found herself
naked and in a state of hukassa
until she heard a sudden beeping sound that
was getting louder until she screamed and woke
up in her bedroom and next to the alarm clock.
naked and in a state of hukassa
until she heard a sudden beeping sound that
was getting louder until she screamed and woke
up in her bedroom and next to the alarm clock.
Published 22nd Mar 2023
Author's Note
In this nuer poem, a woman finds herself lost somewhere and alone except for a certain noise.
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At least Eve (the character suggested by the gorgeous picture, as if she was in the act of reaching out for the Forbidden Fruit) and Adam weren't troubled by the invention of alarm clocks.
22nd Mar 2023 7:45pm
This picture prompted this poetic caption in my mind:
If I'd been Adam in the garden,
the Fall of Man wouldn't happen.
I'd have told Eve, "DONT pick that fruit,
don't want to lose the birthday suit!"
Its eating was the Judas kiss
that led to end of our nude bliss.
If I'd been Adam in the garden,
the Fall of Man wouldn't happen.
I'd have told Eve, "DONT pick that fruit,
don't want to lose the birthday suit!"
Its eating was the Judas kiss
that led to end of our nude bliss.
22nd Mar 2023 8:37pm
25th Mar 2023 8:02am
I have developed the poem and made it one in its own right titled If I Was Adam.. and posted it in the spiritual section (only because the picture would not save in a format that was uploadable here - if it had it would have been in the this erotic section). Don't let the 'Extreme Content' label put anyone off!
25th Mar 2023 12:47pm
25th Mar 2023 3:19pm
Another rhyming caption came to mind:
Reaching up for the forbidden,
her nakedness still unhidden.
Reaching up for the forbidden,
her nakedness still unhidden.
26th Mar 2023 6:46pm
22nd Mar 2023 3:10pm
22nd Mar 2023 7:45pm
