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Chronic Dissatisfaction
sense of
living a lie
no matter how much pleasure
or pain comes your way
dissatisfaction
resisting openness
resisting the moment
resisting truth
resisting who you are
what are you hiding from?
your self
(C)2023 Raibeart Bruis
living a lie
no matter how much pleasure
or pain comes your way
dissatisfaction
resisting openness
resisting the moment
resisting truth
resisting who you are
what are you hiding from?
your self
(C)2023 Raibeart Bruis
Published 21st Mar 2023
| Edited 24th Mar 2023
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21st Mar 2023 5:47pm
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21st Mar 2023 6:11pm
You make points and ask the hard questions that just level me with their connection to my own experiences/existence.
I appreciate the enormous poignance and profound depth of your poem and the possibilities that an answer may conjure...
Excellent thought provoking, KP
It's so so lovely to see you 🦋
🌹💙 💙
Hope you are doing well
-Susan
I appreciate the enormous poignance and profound depth of your poem and the possibilities that an answer may conjure...
Excellent thought provoking, KP
It's so so lovely to see you 🦋
🌹💙 💙
Hope you are doing well
-Susan
24th Mar 2023 7:26pm
I think most of us have these feelings at times.
Thank you.
Good to see you, too.
❣️❣️❣️🙏
Thank you.
Good to see you, too.
❣️❣️❣️🙏
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