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beaUtiful
Captivated by how you see the sky
I gravitate toward the colors of you
fascinated, as if I've never seen them before
They all run together in the rain
& I find myself envious
of the drops that know you best
certain that at least one has lingered
I sit with myself
& my chaotic little sparks
smiling as I sift through the ash
wondering if you've always
been so beautiful
Or if you even know...
I gravitate toward the colors of you
fascinated, as if I've never seen them before
They all run together in the rain
& I find myself envious
of the drops that know you best
certain that at least one has lingered
I sit with myself
& my chaotic little sparks
smiling as I sift through the ash
wondering if you've always
been so beautiful
Or if you even know...
Author's Note
Artwork: Isaac Israels
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20th Mar 2023 1:36am
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Re. beaUtiful
20th Mar 2023 6:42am
Whether it was you intention or not, I love the way that you have perfectly captivated both the strengths and flaws of attraction. It reads as the title implies, well done!
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21st Mar 2023 1:23am
That's exactly why I like the comments section, to see new things through others eyes is always such an interesting learning experience, thanks for leaving your thoughts
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20th Mar 2023 2:23pm
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21st Mar 2023 2:28am
Thanks for enjoying with me anyway, really appreciate the thoughtful comment!
More likes huh, who knew...
More likes huh, who knew...
Re. beaUtiful
21st Mar 2023 8:23pm
It's always such a moving and refreshing experience to read your artistry. I cannot help but be drawn to this sort of delicately honest yet slightly stripped away style you have, that for me, leaves deep permanent imprints of heady, raw emotion. I absolutely love your thought process, the selection of your word choices and how you string together phrases in the ways you do. The result is some of my absolute favorite poetry on site. Your artwork choices are some of the best and accompany your writing so perfectly. I always look forward to a new poem and that visual 'whole package', whenever I see you in my updates.
Thank you for such incredible reading
🌹💙
B
Thank you for such incredible reading
🌹💙
B
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22nd Mar 2023 5:57am
That means a lot, there are some really amazing poets here, yourself included and sometimes it's just hard to comment, especially when something moves me, so I have to say how much I truly appreciate yours, always so kind!
Thanks for making me smile lady
Thanks for making me smile lady
Re. beaUtiful
22nd Mar 2023 10:56pm
I feel you've shared a secret little moment in your 3rd stanza, it's endearing.
LJ
LJ
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22nd Mar 2023 11:20pm
I think some souls shine a little brighter than others and I feel like they don't even realize how beautiful they are....
Maybe that's what makes them beautiful...
Thanks LJ
Maybe that's what makes them beautiful...
Thanks LJ