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bunte reihe
I want him that way
raw & human
& drunk on the scent of me
& I want him
to fall into me
hard & fast & reckless
until his mouth
tastes
of my perfume
raw & human
& drunk on the scent of me
& I want him
to fall into me
hard & fast & reckless
until his mouth
tastes
of my perfume
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Artwork by Derek Erskine
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Re. bunte reihe
27th Mar 2023 12:55pm
What a fabulous poem. I’ve read this a few times, liking it more every time. I always look forward to your writes poetess.
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Re. bunte reihe
27th Mar 2023 3:26pm
A seductive piece that puts words into the mouth of the pictured woman.
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2nd Apr 2023 4:37am
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She appears to be gesturing her willingness to surrender all to what a lover may sexually offer her, including what little she has to wear.
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Re. bunte reihe
27th Mar 2023 9:56pm
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2nd Apr 2023 4:41am
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