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bunte reihe
I want him that way
raw & human
& drunk on the scent of me
& I want him
to fall into me
hard & fast & reckless
until his mouth
tastes
of my perfume
raw & human
& drunk on the scent of me
& I want him
to fall into me
hard & fast & reckless
until his mouth
tastes
of my perfume
Published 27th Mar 2023
Author's Note
Artwork by Derek Erskine
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27th Mar 2023 12:55pm
What a fabulous poem. I’ve read this a few times, liking it more every time. I always look forward to your writes poetess.
29th Mar 2023 5:03pm
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2nd Apr 2023 4:37am
She appears to be gesturing her willingness to surrender all to what a lover may sexually offer her, including what little she has to wear.
27th Mar 2023 9:56pm
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28th Mar 2023 11:40pm
One of the most delicately evocative pieces of erotica I've read in quite some time. Amazing work.
2nd Apr 2023 4:41am
6th Apr 2023 4:31am
Colourful sequence of words. Yet, short and sweet. And eloquently to the point.
6th Apr 2023 4:35am
15th Apr 2023 5:42pm
This is a winner.
Love how sharp your words are to create those passionate images
Love how sharp your words are to create those passionate images
